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| bigbadgangsta
foxstang2@netzero.net
|  "DOOM 2 wolfenstein level fan-fic pt.1"
, posted Fri 8 Jun 19:24  
The castle loomed in the horizion with pires that stuck the air like daggers.Where were you.This was not the U.S. and this castle did not look like something the monsters created.You cock your shotgun and walk up the road carefully as you do not wish to fall down the mountainside.Suddenly,a shot rings out and you feel a sharp stinging pain in your shoulder.You cry out in agony.The bullet must of had something on it,because you were starting to black out.Die of a poison bullet but hell can't kill me you think to yourself before falling to the dirt.
You wake up in a cell,the walls marked with notches indicating how long the person was in there.The name next to the notches was Blackowitz.Hmm,so this was a prison,but who ran it.You sit in the corner,cradling your injured shoulder,and think of a way to escape.Footsteps echo in the halls and people are talking some strange language.Sounds like german,so you flip the language translator on your helmet.Three men stand right out your door with blank looks on their faces.The large metal door opened with a squeal and the men walked in.
"Name,Rank and Serial Number" the man in front said,in german but your translator made it english.
"None,Yo,D A M N B I Z N E S S" you reply.Without the translator they probably would have killed you.
"Leave me" the man on the left says.The other two men leave and go about their buisness.The man walks up to you and tries to punch you in the stomach,you sidestep,grab his knife and slit his throat.You grab for his pistol and his keys.Time to get outta here.As you get up you wonder what ever happened to that Blackowitz guy?
Im not the devil...im much worse!
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| fraggle`
Not Elton John 
fraggle@alkali.org
20732082
| "Re(1):DOOM 2 wolfenstein level fan-fic pt.1" , posted Sat 9 Jun 06:32
this doom story thing really is so lame
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| | bigbadgangsta
foxstang2@netzero.net
| "Re(2):DOOM 2 wolfenstein level fan-fic pt.1" , posted Sat 9 Jun 17:02
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this doom story thing really is so lame
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Fraggle,who the hell asked for your opinion (not that we care what you have to say)?Oh no fraggle doesnt like my story im gonna go cry now...
Im not the devil...im much worse!
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| | fraggle`
Not Elton John 
fraggle@alkali.org
20732082
| "Re(3):DOOM 2 wolfenstein level fan-fic pt.1" , posted Sun 10 Jun 07:47
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Fraggle,who the hell asked for your opinion
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well, by posting it here on a public message board i assume you are hoping for some kind of feedback? if you cant take somebody pointing out that your writing is crap then dont post, geez
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| | DooMBoy
Quit talkin' and go down on my mound! 
tallj_2000@yahoo.com
287657894
| "Re(2):DOOM 2 wolfenstein level fan-fic pt.1" , posted Sat 9 Jun 15:52
No, it's not.
The truth is I only play Doom two times a day-daytime and nighttime!-DooMBoy
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| | stphrz'
stphrz@yahoo.com
Nah...
| "Re(2):DOOM 2 wolfenstein level fan-fic pt.1" , posted Sat 9 Jun 06:38
Hey, isn't your fish supposed to be upside down?
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| | fraggle`
Not Elton John
fraggle@alkali.org
20732082
| "Re(3):DOOM 2 wolfenstein level fan-fic pt.1" , posted Sun 10 Jun 07:41
i dont know what you're talking about :P
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| | Lüt
Albino Negro 
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| "Re(3):DOOM 2 wolfenstein level fan-fic pt.1" , posted Sat 9 Jun 12:47
I gave it pills :)
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| | Zaldron
Le Ventilateur 
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| "Re(4):DOOM 2 wolfenstein level fan-fic pt.1" , posted Sat 9 Jun 15:29
Wait...to the fish or to Sthprz'?
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| | deathwarrior
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| "Re(5):DOOM 2 wolfenstein level fan-fic pt.1" , posted Sun 10 Jun 04:09
Both, I think. ;)
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| Davidoom
davidoomz@hotmail.com
Dave
| "Re(1):DOOM 2 wolfenstein level fan-fic pt.1" , posted Sat 9 Jun 00:08
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You cock your shotgun
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uhhuhhu...you said cock.
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| | bigbadgangsta
foxstang2@netzero.net
| "Re(2):DOOM 2 wolfenstein level fan-fic pt.1" , posted Sat 9 Jun 01:04
so david,why did the word cock catch your eye?
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| | Davidoom
davidoomz@hotmail.com
Dave
| "Re(3):DOOM 2 wolfenstein level fan-fic pt.1" , posted Sun 10 Jun 02:09
Oh yeah...:(
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| | fraggle`
Not Elton John
fraggle@alkali.org
20732082
| "Re(4):DOOM 2 wolfenstein level fan-fic pt.1" , posted Sun 10 Jun 07:49
dont get me started on billy corgan quotes, damnit
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| | RTC Marine
walruss@zfree.co.nz
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| "Re(3):DOOM 2 wolfenstein level fan-fic pt.1" , posted Sat 9 Jun 03:21
hehehe
Confucious say: Boy and girl who go camping together have naughty intent.
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| | Xenoman
michael@chello.se
59834301
| "Re(4):DOOM 2 wolfenstein level fan-fic pt.1" , posted Sat 9 Jun 03:35
*ZzZzZz*
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