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| Espi
esa.repo@pp.nic.fi
|  "Level"
, posted Thu 15 Feb 03:20  
I finished one doom map, and I would like some feedback on it. Download it here:
http://www.geocities.com/espibrown/firstmap.zip
It's for Doom2 map01 and a source port that can handle new sprites and flats without deusf is recommended.
"No matter what you order the same thing will come
A plate of refried shit just covered in crumbs" - A. Jourgensen
Check my crappy site:
http://www.geocities.com/espibrown
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| Jive
jive@newdoom.com
66525526
|  "Re(1):Level"
, posted Sun 18 Feb 03:06
For a first Map, it's a cool job!
Well designed architecture, textures without any misalignement, gameplay well thought, ammos very well balanced(if you dare to fight the demons with your only little fists...)
The only error I have noticed is that one linedef appear on the
automap without necessity (linedef 286)
To finish, I shall say that there is not enough decorations, and
no lightings at all : what a pity! And I agree with Biffy for the health!
I send you the full comments by email.
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WebMaster of "Doom Legacy's Wads" aka "DLW" :
http://www.newdoom.com/jive/
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| Jive
jive@newdoom.com
66525526
|  "Re(1):Level"
, posted Sat 17 Feb 18:01
I just downloaded it, and as soon as i will have tried it, I will send you my comments, as usual!
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WebMaster of "Doom Legacy's Wads" aka "DLW" :
http://www.newdoom.com/jive/
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| Biffy
mblakely@jpl.nasa.gov
15711332
| "Re(1):Level" , posted Sat 17 Feb 08:47
Pretty good for a first map, you put quite a bit of time into it.
I agree with other poster that you can do some more with it, there is plenty of area to use, in terms of a bit more fighting
and resources (weaps, ammo). But on the other hand, it's refreshing not to have another fight on your hand every time you turn a corner.
Only problem I had was wishing I could find just one medikit when I was about half way through the play, found lots later when I did not need as much.
Thanks for the fun, keep at it.
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| Stealthy Ivan
Stealthyivan@hotmail.com
| "Cool" , posted Thu 15 Feb 11:54
I played your level. Well, your design is cool and your level is very detailed. There was only one problem that I seen, it needed more items,guns,ammo,and enimies. But over all, it was good. You get a little more practice, and I wouldnt mind having you as a team member..!
my teams web page
http://sxtech.net/teamasphix
Stealthy Ivan
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| | Espi
esa.repo@pp.nic.fi
| "Re(1):Cool" , posted Thu 15 Feb 17:55
I thought I'd make it so that the player isn't overloaded with ammunition and health, but rather what you get, you use. I was able to play it just fine on UV, but then again I knew what's coming. Maybe I should tweak them skill levels though... and add some decoration. Anyway this is going to be the first level of a some kind of small episode, and probably it is going to get improved more or less.
"No matter what you order the same thing will come
A plate of refried shit just covered in crumbs" - A. Jourgensen
Check my crappy site:
http://www.geocities.com/espibrown
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| Stealthy Ivan
Stealthyivan@hotmail.com
| "Re(1):Level" , posted Thu 15 Feb 09:48
I will download it and give it a try....
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| AirRaid
airraid@maidencentral.com
|  "Re(1):Level"
, posted Thu 15 Feb 04:52
I'll have a look. I'll probablt get back to you tommorrow
"You've got to watch them - Be Quick or Be Dead!"
Iron Maiden - '92
airraid@maidencentral.com
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