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herooftime1000
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http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q296/herooftime1000/Blaz3-1.png

What did you think? My sis did the line art and I did the coloring. I just wanted to know your thoughts before I gave this back to her.
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http://www.doomworld.com/gbd2/misc/myeyes.jpg
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Its...okay...but nothing really to post on Deviantart or anything like that.
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The only critique I can make is on your very suspect use of the word 'Art'.
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If it's just to improve his sister's draw to give it back to her, it's not so bad...

Edit : I have a question : is the radio playing some Linkin Park music ?
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Scuba Steve said:
myeyes


Steeveeo said:
Its...okay...but nothing really to post on Deviantart or anything like that.

are you kidding deviantart is evidently the home for this stuff!!!
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Could make a Heretic character...

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herooftime1000
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Ack! Is it that bad?! Oh geez, this is a blow to the ol' ego. What exactly is wrong with it?

Scubasteve: Wow...Just...wow.....

Printz: I'm guessing you never played Pokemon huh?
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Ant has competition?
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This is the worst thing I've ever seen.
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herooftime1000
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Da Spadger said:
This is the worst thing I've ever seen.


Ouch! That was an uppercut...

I'm really questioning my ability as a sprite artist here...
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Da Spadger said:
This is the worst thing I've ever seen.


dude, you're kidding me. I can show you stuff that makes you rethink "art". This is art compared to the trash you can find on any Web 2.0 art portal.

perhaps my eyes are jaded from seeing too much internet at once.
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printz
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This is the worst thing I've ever seen.
WTF is wrong with you? To me it looks like beginner work. It can get better with time. There just ain't enough detail, but it's promising. I don't know if herooftime1000's sister is older or younger.

MIND IF I THINK OF AVATARRING THIS PICTURE TO MYSELF?

EDIT: Damn, so it's pokemon? Ugh. Forget it. I thought it's original. See how mood can change in one?

EDIT: What's with that dick on Scuba Steve's imported image?

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Totally deviant art worthy.
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herooftime1000
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Ok. I got my fill... Everyone thought it sucked. For your info, My sis is a year younger than me and I'm twenty.

Blah, she is not gonna like this one bit...

and I TOTALLY am questioning my talent as a sprite artist... Scuba steve, you came to me for a proposal to work with you, now you give me, well, THAT! That really hurts.

Ugh...maybe I should give up on the megawad...

Admin...Please send this thread to hell.
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it's ok, really. but it needs to be in fanfics-fanart subforum from now on.
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Don't worry Hero... with practice it comes...
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K!r4 said:
Edit : I have a question : is the radio playing some Linkin Park music ?

I think Slammer started a fad... ;-)

Anyways, Hero, don't stress over it. I don't get the feeling that Pokemon is very popular around here. The coloration you did looks fine, and since you're just helping out your sister with a casual project, I don't see anything at all wrong with this.
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the shocking part is that it took two people to create this

it's also clearly furry so -9.999000046515199593198317600017e+81 points
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leileilol said:
the shocking part is that it took two people to create this

it's also clearly furry so -9.999000046515199593198317600017e+81 points



Maybe I suck...

http://darkhalos-mistress.deviantart.com/gallery/

But in NO WAY is my sis a bad artist!!!
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Some of her drawings aren't that bad indeed.
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herooftime1000 said:
My sis is a year younger than me and I'm twenty.
Oh, my.
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Indeed, this is all kinds of awful. It's hard to be constructive if this is the work of a 19-year-old. And the bizarre glowing shading technique thing universally applied to the entire character just makes it worse.

What's the deal with that cassette player's perspective? It looks like a giant building in the background.

And are those tits?

Finally, on a relatively positive note, the stuff in the provided link is nowhere near as bad as this.
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Richo Rosai said:
Indeed, this is all kinds of awful. It's hard to be constructive if this is the work of a 19-year-old. And the bizarre glowing shading technique thing universally applied to the entire character just makes it worse.

What's the deal with that cassette player's perspective? It looks like a giant building in the background.

And are those tits?

Finally, on a relatively positive note, the stuff in the provided link is nowhere near as bad as this.


I see. So this drawing was good until I got a hold of it. After all, it was I who did the coloring. Look, bud. We all have our off days, ok?
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I really don't like this anime drawing fad that's going around, it's ruining a generation of artists with its formulaic and frankly poor quality. It doesn't matter who drew it, every anime picture looks exactly like another.

Tell your sister she needs to learn to draw like an American.
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Bank said:
I really don't like this anime drawing fad that's going around, it's ruining a generation of artists with its formulaic and frankly poor quality. It doesn't matter who drew it, every anime picture looks exactly like another.

Tell your sister she needs to learn to draw like an American.


My sister will draw whatever she damn pleases. Why don't YOU go learn to draw like an American and impress us all with your amazing art, Van Gogh. Otherwise, shut up.
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herooftime1000 said:


My sister will draw whatever she damn pleases. Why don't YOU go learn to draw like an American and impress us all with your amazing art. Otherwise, shut up.


If you insist.

EDIT: Oh and btw if we're both editing our posts, Van Gogh was Dutch.

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herooftime1000 said:


I see. So this drawing was good until I got a hold of it. After all, it was I who did the coloring. Look, bud. We all have our off days, ok?


If you'll kindly read what I wrote, you'll know my opinion was that this drawing was BAD until you got ahold of it, at which time it became worse.

I mean, just look at the face, the deformed hand, the odd square play and record buttons...
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Ok, ok. You are not bad. I like your style. BUT! In my opinion, you are no better than my sis. She has her style, you have your own. It doesn't matter what style you use, as long as people enjoy it.
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Ack! double post. My bad. Oh well.

Ok..THAT'S IT!

It's time come clean... I'll show you all what I really am.

I gave Death Destiny this PM but I think it would be appropriate to show all of you. And depending on your reaction. I might just quit being in this forum, for my dignity will be crushed in the dust.

My megawad and my flash cartoon...is well...Are you ready? Here goes...

*Breathes in* My cartoon is set twenty years after Ocarina of Time and about the son of Link who receives the Master Sword and becomes the next line in Hero of Time. In a twist of fate, he meets Kit McCloud, the daughter of Fox McCloud, and Apollo Lombardi the son of Falco Lombardi.
While trying to rid the world of shadows that are infecting Hyrule they meet Blaze I. Kensy, Angel Gardens, and Jack Galiant, all three being (oh gosh) pokemon. All six erase the shadows from the world and all six band together to make a mercenary group. They are the people to call for any sort of trouble.

My megawad was about Angel and Jack walking through the woods when Jack is captured by the soldiers of Umbrella. (Yes, Resident Evil's Umbrella.) Angel, all alone, tries to fight Umbrella to get her love of her life back.

THERE!!! I spilled it all out for you. Now tell me this.

Do I belong in doomworld? Who knows, My flash cartoon may be a bit popular, maybe I want to make the megawad for fun and fans.

But will I be welcome here? Should I just leave?

Oh and here's my deviantart page.

http://herooftime1000.deviantart.com/

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