zzdevelin Posted July 21, 2003 Okay im working on a new story DEATH here is chapter 1 Chapter 1 coming of the storm John: Damn look at that wind man! Jack: Yeah fuck it looks a big storm is coming John: Fuck this shit! *Meanwhile at the beach* Lifeguard: Evacuate quick quick get the hell out of here! *Everybody runs* *In space* *From a satelite* Astronaut 1: Damn look at that typhoon! Astronaut 2: Its just a cyclone! A1: No look at the storm clouds! *A2 looks down* A2: Holy Shit! A1: The ... the clouds are red! blood red i say! *BLAM!* A1&A2: ARGH! *The satelite explodes in flames* *From somewhere* ?:ROAR! *In the storm* People: AH! *SLASH!* Someguy: What was that? Otherguy: Blood! ?:ROAR! *Slash slash!* *In apartment* Man: Holy Motherfucking shit! Baron of hell: ROAR! Jack: Hands u- Damn it WTF! John: Damn! Baron: Roar! *BLAM BLAM BLAM BLAM!* Jack: That thing just aint goin down! Baron: *SLASH* Man: Oof! *Dies* *SLAM!* Baron: AAARRRRGGGGGGHHHHHH! John: WTF did you did? Jack: Used a big ol pipe! Baron:........... *In the storm* ?: ROAR! LETS MOVE ON! *The Storm moves faster* ?: TIME FOR THE APOCALYPSE!!! To be countinued... what do yo tink? 0 Share this post Link to post
Silverwyvern Posted July 21, 2003 It was like a story had a seizure. Interesting but feels kinda thrown together. 0 Share this post Link to post
