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deathz0r

doom community story!

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She starts firing at the little freak. The slugs make a satisfacting rip sound as they cut the flesh of the monster, its screams matching her gattling gun...

You think you hear gunshots and screaming, the scream sends a chill down your spine. You feel knots in your stomach as you press forth in the darkness, the only light piercing the darkness is red. Is that an omen?

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You burst out of the corridor into the security checkpoint, panting. There are dead bodies everywhere, either mutilated or riddled with bullet holes. The door to security command is just across the room. Wading through the carnage, you reach the door and yank on it. It doesn't budge. You yank harder, and still it remains frozen in place. Putting all your strength into a third pull doesn't help much, either. Although it's frustrating, it means someone got through to the other side and sealed the door. Someone else could be alive somewhere.

Turning around to search for another way into the security command, your eye falls upon a ventilation grate that should be just large enough to squeeze into...

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You kick the grate to shreds and climb in. The air inside is musty, dank and heavy. You crawl, pistol forth, damn near getting stuck in a few places. You round a corner and are eyeball to eyeball with a floating, burning skull. You shoot it in the face twice and it still doesnt die. It rears back and you punch the damn thing, knocking it back, but also burning your hand. You grab for the SSG strapped to your back...

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Ignoring the pain in your hand, you manage to pull the shotgun out of its strap and into firing position in your hands. The skull banks around and prepares for another attack. Before it can move an inch, it is blown into powder by your double barrel shotgun. Deciding it never hurt to be safe, you keep your shotgun at the ready in front of you as you continue to crawl down the ducts...

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You crawl, wishing you had a lamp or a flashlight. You have crawled about 50 feet. Suddenly, the vents begin to creak and you fall through, landing on some boxes with a thud and the crumpling of cardboard. You look around the dimly lit room and hear a low, guttural growl. Fuck.

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Not wanting to loose your head, you cautiously look for a light switch. After a few seconds, you see one near the door. Quickly looking around, you make a dash for it. You get there unscathed, and flick the light on...
...only to crack up laughing when you realise you've landed in the veterinary clinic. The growl sounded again, and looking for the source, you see it is your dog Rover (Note: Hey, you think of a better name on short notice :P). He was slated for some surgery tomorrow, and you put him in earlier on in the day to get him used to the clinic.
"Hey, Rover!" you say as you walk towards him.
His growling became louder.
"Hey, it's just me! It's alright, boy!"
Only when a shadow started creeping over your own shadow did you realise it wasn't you he was growling at...

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It was the huge, red ball with one eye, floating behind you. You aim the DBS and fire, knocking it back. The blood drips and it belches a fireball, which you dodge, but it hits Rover's cage, killing him. You get pissed. You reach to your side and pull out your chainsaw. You yell as you rev it and lunge forth...

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You swipe the chainsaw across the beast's face, cutting a deep line across it's face. It bellows in rage and swallows you whole...big mistake. Its a snug fit inside it's mouth and with one tug of the chainsaw's cord, blood begins to fly.

Moments later, you are standing in a pile of blue and red gore. There's one less horror in the world, you think to yourself. You walk to the corner where there is a utility sink and wash yourself off. No sooner is your face clean of viscera that you hear a banging on the door...

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"Fuckin' let me in!" someone screams. You rush over to the door and open it. The person shoves you aside and closes the door. She is buff and kinda sexy, holding a gattling gun and has scrapes and cuts on her body. Shes panting as she leans against the door. You stare at her incrediously.
"Who are you?" you ask, not taking your gaze from her face.
"Kia. I am the head of security." She says, catching her breath...

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..."and just outside that door is your worst nightmare."
CLANG!
She nearly knocks you over again as she jumps away from the door. Pulling out your shotgun, you stand in front of her and open the door, ready to blow the fuck out of whatever is out there...

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...Meanwhile, Kia starts chuckling. "A bit trigger-happy, aren't we, Russell?" she taunts.

Annoyed, you slam the door and look down at the metal floor where she's dropped a pipe wrench. "You really think I'd jump away from a reinforced door even if the entire contents of Hell itself were pounding on the door? No way!"

Just then, oozing under the door, comes a metallic puddle. "Uh, Kia..."

She looks over and screams.

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...that, apparently, Doom-Child can't be arsed to read what has gone before.

I'm sorry to interrupt here, but that last section was too far of a jump away from what had just gone before - either edit that post so that you include another scene change (see where Kia comes in originally) or fix it so that it runs semi-smoothly with what's currently going on.

And the door is still shut and not broken...

BTW, while I'm still off-topic, how long do you think this will go on before we finally compile this into one story?

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[non-story]

..."and just outside that door is your worst nightmare."
CLANG!
She nearly knocks you over again as she jumps away from the door. Pulling out your shotgun, you stand in front of her and open the door, ready to blow the fuck out of whatever is out there...


What was that about that door?

DC
[/non-story]

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Anyway, back to the story...

As the crab starts reforming after its passage under the door, you fire a couple of bullets at it, which go through and ricochet off the floor. "Shit," Kia swears as she hurriedly ransacks the small room. Then she comes across a secret panel, with a rocket launcher inside, and one rocket. "Russ, you're going to have to make this count."

You fire the rocket at it, with the only effect being that your ears start ringing. That's when the words of Frank Zappa start running through your head... "Bullets can't stop it... rockets can't stop it... we may have to use NUCLEAR FORCE!"

Saying this out loud, Kia gives you a look like you're nuts. Then her eyes light up. "There's an experimental weapons factory down lower. They've got actual nuclear hand grenades down there."

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"Ok. Lets go." You say.
"You take point" She says as you open the door. Flames and smoke assault your nose as you walk into the room. Goddamnit! The fuckers have started a fire!

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Or so you think.

Heading back into the room you were just in, you find about a half-dozen gas masks, and grab two. You and Kia put them on, and start making your way through the cloud of smoke.

Then you run into what looks like a metal wall. As you move away from the fire, it starts to dawn on you what this is.

It's a crashed shuttlecraft.

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"Argh...." You hear as you look at the shuttlecraft. You and Kia rush over. There is a man inside. Hes bleeding and looks like he wont survive. He coughs. "Ugh..." he looks up at you "Who the hell are you?" the dirty man asks.
"What happened?" You inquire.
"Well *cough* I was attacked by floating things and they...*cough cough* beat my ass" he says, voice cracked.
"Stay calm" Kia says, you look at her. Her soft skin, you take this in and suddenly the man starts to clutch his chest.
"Gah! Take the *cough**hack**wheeze* stuff from the back and this *cough* keycard". As he finishes the sentence he dies. Heart attack or something...

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Looking inside the remains of the shuttlecraft, you find several grenades that miraculously survived whatever impact caused the crash, as well as a small paper box of shells. Pocketing what you can, you hand the grenades to Kia.

"Looks like we're ready to dance.", she says, smiling evilly. "You lead.", comes your reply through clenched teeth.

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Your forehead is slick with sweat and your breathing is fast. Damn, I never thought I would be fighting monsters...Kia's face was hard set, determined, but still caring. You see the crab thing crawling forth, you pull the pin on the grenade...

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...And toss it.

Nothing happens.

The crab, startled by the clanking noise of the grenade bouncing along, goes over to inspect it. It extrudes a tentacle over to the grenade, touches it, starts absorbing it, and...

You come to shortly afterwards. "Damn, Kia, those things really pack a lot of bang into a really small space," you say.

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"Well ASSHOLE you have to twist the activator!" She says sharply.
"Damn." You pull the pin on the next one and twist the activator. You toss it.

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This time, after tossing it, you have enough sense to take cover. No sense in being knocked out a second time.

When you come out of the cubbyhole you've found, several foot-thick concrete walls have man-sized holes in them. Through one comes something out of your worst nightmares.

Eight feet tall, looking almost human, but built like a linebacker, and carrying a pair of two-foot knives, it steps forward and shrieks.

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After your ears stop ringing, you and Kia open fire. Powder and brimstone fill the air. When the smoke clears, you see the smoking remains of whatever the hell that thing was. Or is, rather, as it staggers to its feet clutching a two-foot wide hole in its chest, and playing a VERY pissed-off look across its swollen, misshapen, and now blood-stained features.

For some reason, you find the fact that very nearly half of this hellspawn's face is missing funny. Shotguns are good for something after all.

Barely audible, you detect a faint "Shit." from just behind you.

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You hear it again. "Shit. Shit, shit, shit!"

Turning around, you see another one of the giant linebackers coming through a hole. "That's odd," Kia says. "I didn't expect them to talk."

"I told him not to come out here with those blades," it says. "But no, he has to come out here and act like a complete idiot. Serves him right."

Feeling like someone's playing you for an idiot, you ask, "So you're not on the side of these monsters?"

"Oh, of course not! You saw the shuttle, right? We'd been picked up by that. A shame what happened on there, though... especially with these new variants coming up."

Kia finally speaks up. "Well, you're more than welcome to help out. Let's go."

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Suddenly, you remember the walking remains of whatever the hell these things are. "What about him?", you ask.

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"Oh, right. Forgot about that," he responds. Then he walks over to the dead one, and puts his head to the head of the corpse.

After a couple of minutes, Kia starts getting impatient. Suddenly, he gets up and says, "Okay, done. This guy won't be getting up any time soon."

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You see a U.A.C. Civilian shambling forth.
"Hey!" Kia shouts! The man does not respond. Instead he takes aim with his .357 magnum. He fires, Kia gets it in the shoulder, but it doesnt go through the skin. You see a glimmer of metal, and you look. Its a Vulcan Cannon!

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