yellowmadness54
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Bank said:
Your art is mediocre. What do you want us to say?
If you want a critique fine, though I doubt you'll take it. Your drawing is amateurish to the nth degree and shows no understanding of anatomy, space, or composition. Your figures are scratchy contour line drawings that all seem to just be piled on top of one another. You do not demonstrate how to draw a face, nor do you demonstrate how to foreshorten. Your characters are not adequately abstracted or exaggerated enough to be considered caricatures or cartoons, nor are they detailed or accurate enough to be considered renderings. On top of that it's a horrible scan so even being able to comment on the quality is out of the question.
Your animations are blocky, silhouetted, and otherwise forgettable. If using the software you do to make these is so difficult, why not switch to something more dynamic or professional? This may seem harsh but you must ask yourself, why bring work in front of others in the first place if you don't want them to give you their honest opinion of it?
The reason people put artwork in any public arena regardless of quality is for it to be seen. What they take from it after that is purely up to the artist. No one is going to like everything you do all of the time, but what are you trying to prove by posting these? That you have the ability to scrawl a line across the back of your homework and operate a scanner? Perhaps a better way to have gone about things instead of signing up for a forum and immediately firing back insults and accusations would have been to accept criticism or not post the image at all. Compounded with your first post being warez you must see why you're not particularly loved around here.
I hope you can find some part of this post useful and if you would like any help in improving your work I'd be happy to offer suggestions and critiques.
Yeah, and yours are much better?
Its something that looks quickly drawn on MS paint that you could find hidden somewhere at newgrounds.
The animations are tests showing off the weapons. If I wanted them good, it would have been a full fledged animation.
Proffesional programs cost money, which is gay because im not making money off it. I didnt intend you to care for the animation, just the weapon it self and how it operates without bugs, which isn't easy to do.
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