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There have been a few movie ideas over this past weekend. So I did my own idea. I wrote bullet points of a movie outline with something that should be like classic Doom and lead past what the original movie incorporated. This is more a big picture outline. Maybe this should go into the fan fiction section? Feel free to give feedback. Thanks for reading!

Doomguy injures CO and gets shipped off into space
Stationed on a patrol ship (subtly play cover of Doom’s Sign Of Evil)
Doomguy spends his days doing pushups, bench presses and chin ups
Two facilities on Phobos and Deimos for dumping toxic waste
Phobos and Deimos both have their own private security army
Phobos is so close to Mars the sky is red all day
Uh where’d Deimos go? It should come back from around Mars
There’s no debris or anything obscuring it
Calls for help from Phobos complex
Security cannot contain and they’re asking for assistance
Marines send a landing party
Doomguy and another marine the ship and establish a parameter
There are radio calls for help
Everyone is dying!
The two men try to enter Phobos complex
The doors don’t open
Once communications end and its assumed everyone is dead
Not able to contact the patrol ship due to interference
Hours later the doors open to let them in
They’re fired upon from the darkness, but fire back
Silence for a moment so they check
It’s a man... What was he shooting at? Friendly fire?

Washroom spot out of Doom 3 alpha a body is dragged in.
They follow the dragged body.
Blood is everywhere.
Men are torn apart in there.
Doomguy sees Pinkie appear in the washroom mirror
Other marine is mauled by Pinkie and his arm is torn off!
Pinkie won the fight and looks at Doomguy
Doomguy empties a clip into the demon who takes it
Fight or flight with Doomguy
There’s a door behind the Doomguy but a shotgun in front
They both charge toward the shotgun, they meet in the middle
Doomguy shoots it right in the face and it drops
Calls for medical team who are unresponsive
Man is dead, tries CPR
He fails... Meds call back... They’ll see what they can do
Man raises back up and gets shot in the face
Doesn’t drop, shoots him two more times and he drops
Med team comes and Doomguy accidentally shoots at them
Med team tells him to drop his weapon, he doesn’t
Med team sedates him
Wakes up in an infirmary
No communication with the jump ship
Some want to get the hell off the moon
There was a teleporter malfunction
An anomaly really
No one can get close enough to the transporter to shut it off
The invasion came through the anomaly
Scientist is convinced he can power down the anomaly
Doom guy goes with as a bodyguard
If they abandon the moon without shutting down the anomaly...
Phobos might disappear like Deimos
Small team goes to shut down the reactor
Look at a high tech table map that shows the hanger...
Then shows the buildings in the Stickney crater with a “you are here”
A drop off blood from Doomguy’s nose pours out and splotches power plant
Interlude music plays lightly in the background

Visit the armory, but there’s not much left
They find a chain gun on a pedestal... Needs a combination
Doomguy just tries to shoot through it, but it’s bulletproof
Scientist uses the combination to open it
Combination fails the room is sealed off for security
Trapped in a room with sounds from the walls
Walls dent through
Chain gun case breaks, Doomguy gets the chain gun
Mow down imps, pinkies & zombies

Get to the reactor (Metallica’s ‘The Thing Should not Be’ subtly plays)
There are people there struggling to keep the power on!
Doom guy is shot in the arm
Everything is okay and the situation is calmed
He needs treatment
Without the generator on, Phobos will go critical!!! Theoretically.
Master chief is dead, so they don’t really know for sure
It was a nuke dump originally, before it was what it is
Doomguy shuts down the reactor or has it shut down
Emergency power turns on...
That’s not enough to power the transporter
The reactor shut down fails to stop the anomaly
Phobos fails to go critical temporarily
They try to turn the reactor on and fail

Woman bandages him up
He’s injected with morphine for the pain
Its not morphine, its berserk (morphine has been tainted with nukeage)
He goes crazy even on allies (play Slayer’s Criminally Insane)

Phobos announces that it will go critical unless nukeage is vented
Phobos is a third hollow; a reactor explosion will destroy the moon!
They need to get back to the hanger ASAP (play Pantera’s rise)
A team is left behind to fix the reactor and turn it on...
Soon after the crew are slaughtered
Get back to the hanger; they’ve taken off without them
Make a call to the reactor, no one answeres... They’re dead
The reactor people come in as zombies!

Can the portal go both ways? It’s their only chance!
The portal went to Deimos... which disappeared
You might jump through and not be able to breathe
You’d have limited O2
It’s improvable they’d survive, but not impossible
Doom guy finds a chainsaw
Chainsaws through zombies and imps
He feels people are against him
He ends up chainsawing through allies
Killing montage with 90s heavy metal playing
Doomguy checks his map every so often to see the way show maps from game
Montage might cost a lot of money per minute to film
Killing via all sorts of weapons, fists and chainsaw
Finding blue potions, better helmets, armor
Montage ends when he finds a pentagram on his automap
What the fuck is that, a pentagram?
Everything is breaking down on the way to the anomaly
Demons have invaded a power room
Everything is infested with imps and pinkies
Elevator takes Doomguy up
There are shadows moving everywhere
Barons are teleported in
Doomguy vs Barons
Rockets the barons who survive
Shadows fight against Doomguy!
Shadows are melted from Baron plasma balls
Time is ticking down to Phobos explosion!
The barons literally block his way from entering the anomaly
Defeats the barons, hops into the anomaly
Phobos base explodes!
Doomguy and party fly through a portal!
End?





That’s when the fear begins
Everything gets trippy
Pools of blood
Upside-down crosses
Doomguy's group comes out of the portal
They wonder, are they really in Deimos or Hell?
They wonder, did they make it off Phobos or die?
They look up a giant stairway to an alter
There is a human victim / sacrifice being held there by chains
A giant hand snatches a human victim / sacrifice off the!
Munching is heard, and half the victim's body falls back to the alter
Giant roars are heard
Doomguy and his group backpedal away from the cybernetic leg and hoof of the giant
Don't show the cyberdemon, just its feet
The cyberdemon walks away after eating its sacrifice
Its body is a shadow with horns that slowly sloshes through a lake of blood
Its headed toward a giant green tower in the distance with a hellstorm over it
The green tower dwarfs the giant shadowy cyberdemon
The Doomguy and group face Lost Souls & Caco Demons
Find a plasma launcher and melts everything
Explain: Deimos lab was working on plasma technology to destroy the toxic waste
Time is different on Deimos
Deimos has become demonized
The Deimos anomaly pulled it into Hell (just as Phobos Anomaly WOULD do to Phobos)
Deimos had a portal too, but if Phobos blew up, there’s no way home

If Doomguy is gonna be stuck on Deimos he may as well be the king
How do they stop the cyberdemon?
Deimos lab was working on the BFG
If plasma rifle is powerful, imagine what BFG can do!
Head toward the lab with another killing montage set to 90s heavy metal
Lost souls and cacodemons blowing up from being shot gunned
Plasma rifling through zombies
Doomguy fights hand to hand with Pinkies
More potions, armor, helmets and ammo picked up everywhere
Montage slows down to a stop...
Baron of Hell spot where Doomguy just hides and it walks by
There are gooey bodies all over in Deimos lab
When they find the BFG's case, its empty.
The BFG is gone! Follow the trail of gooey bodies! (BFG makes bodies turn to goo)
They finally find the man who’s carrying the BFG
He explains there's a way off Deimos on Tower of Babel
When Deimos and Hell merged as one, the Tower of Babel was built over the portal
But the Tower of Babel is home to the cyberdemon
BFG Man was going to meet up with his comrades at the tower
BFG has charge enough for one last shot into the cyberdemon
BFG Man dies, turns into zombie.
BFG zombie man is shot in the body and before he can be shot in the head...
Baron breaks through a pane of glass in the background
Baron tears through the party and kills people
Baron grabs someone’s waist and heats up its plasma fist
That person is melted in half!
BFG Zombie wears armor
BFG Zombie is shot to death, Baron throws Doomguy into crusher
Baron charges up its plasma fist
The crusher comes down and the Doomguy rolls out of the way
Crusher nearly smashes Doomguy
Doomguy shotguns Baron who falls back and its hand gets crushed
Doomguy runs
Cat and mouse vs Baron inside of a lab with dead specimens
Eventually the Doomguy wins the battle

He looks out a window up at the Tower of Babel.
He fixtures his space helmet on and steps out of an air lock
He leaves the Deimos complex to the Deimos surface
Then he walks toward the giant tower beneath a hell sky
A breif killing montage as the Doomguy works his way up the tower
Imps crawling the walls, pinkies charging, cacos flying, blood falls
Slaughtered human sacrifices strung up, hideous walls of human skin
Come up through the center to fight Cyberdemon!
The montage quickly slows as the Doomguy is at the top
Imps are tied on marble pillars to feed the cyberdemon
Cyberdemon eats the head off an imp!
Behind the cyberdemon is a ray of light coming down from the hellsky
Its the portal and has swirling light
Other security officers are there and fail to defeat the cyberdemon
They are all slaughtered by the cyberdemon's rockets
One is stepped on by its cybernetic leg!
One paranoid man (in shock) with white hair stays hidden and speaks to the Doomguy
He says that portal leads deeper into Hell and the cyberdemon is the gatekeeper
He only came with his group for protection and now they're all dead

The Doomguy is confident his BFG will take down the cyber demon
BFG misses... lights up the sky with green killing a sea of lost souls flying around up there...
BFG is empty and needs a cell
The Doomguy dodges rockets and explosions out of an 80s action movie
The Doomguy finds a cell and cyberdemon takes a BFG shot to the crotch
Cyberdemon is thrown backward and dead on the ground
Doomguy drops the BFG and races toward the portal / anomaly (with the cyberdemon between them)
Time is moving slow, its a long distance to the portal (but not slow motion)
He gets a short distance from the cyberdemon and the portal, before a rocket screams by him
The cyberdemon still alive, but cracked & torn
It begins to get up still glowing with green from BFG
Doomguy empties his shotgun into demon’s head and then pistol all while running forward.
Then the cyberdemon is nearly fully standing
Doomguy pulls the chainsaw off his back
Chainsaws its non robotic leg
Cyberdemon throws him nearly the distance of the courtyard
Fires rockets, Doomguy dodges them
Blinding speed forward with the chainsaw
Doomguy leaps into the air with a chainsaw swipe at cyberdemon's heart
Doomguy lands, then FULLY chainsaws off its non cybernetic leg and it falls back
Cyberdemon fires a rocket on its back that is a near miss
Doomguy chainsaws its head off!
Overhead shot
The rocket arm goes limp and the Doomguy grabs a horn and drags the cyberdemon head away from its body
Sickening display, the Doomguy drops to his knees
The ray of portal light stands ominously before him

End movie

Last edited by geo on 06-09-11 at 02:35

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I like it but why did doomguy chainsaw his allies? I know he's sort of insane as highlighted by the comics but still..

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Thats something easily taken out :-)

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Phobos part sounded good, but would probably work as a differnt movie, with Deimos being a second movie. ALso the second half seemed kinda confusing. Lone marine, finds BFG, is killed, then another Marine army appears and one of the mariens kills the Cybie?

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I really don't think people want to see just Phobos as a movie and they want a cyberdemon. Especially because the original movie was kind of a prequil to the Doom game. And yes the second half needs to get hammered out. I should point out there are other people in Deimos or figure something out.

Thanks for the feedback btw.

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I like it :)
but 1 problem is that in reality both Phobos and Deimos have such a low gravity that you can escape the moon just by jumping :P

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LOL yeah I did research about that and found the same thing to be true. Maybe in Doom you couldn't jump because your boots are weighted. But I guess the catch would be if you jumped off Phobos you'd literally land on Mars or burn up in its orbit.

If you jump off Deimos... you'd need something to catch you or of course you'd drift or freeze.

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ok I redid Deimos to make it more like a movie and hopefully less confusing. I changed the original post as well...

DEIMOS >>

That’s when the fear begins
Everything gets trippy
Pools of blood
Upside-down crosses
Doomguy's group comes out of the portal
They wonder, are they really in Deimos or Hell?
They wonder, did they make it off Phobos or die?
They look up a giant stairway to an alter
There is a human victim / sacrifice being held there by chains
A giant hand snatches a human victim / sacrifice off the!
Munching is heard, and half the victim's body falls back to the alter
Giant roars are heard
Doomguy and his group backpedal away from the cybernetic leg and hoof of the giant
Don't show the cyberdemon, just its feet
The cyberdemon walks away after eating its sacrifice
Its body is a shadow with horns that slowly sloshes through a lake of blood
Its headed toward a giant green tower in the distance with a hellstorm over it
The green tower dwarfs the giant shadowy cyberdemon
The Doomguy and group face Lost Souls & Caco Demons
Find a plasma launcher and melts everything
Explain: Deimos lab was working on plasma technology to destroy the toxic waste
Time is different on Deimos
Deimos has become demonized
The Deimos anomaly pulled it into Hell (just as Phobos Anomaly WOULD do to Phobos)
Deimos had a portal too, but if Phobos blew up, there’s no way home

If Doomguy is gonna be stuck on Deimos he may as well be the king
How do they stop the cyberdemon?
Deimos lab was working on the BFG
If plasma rifle is powerful, imagine what BFG can do!
Head toward the lab with another killing montage set to 90s heavy metal
Lost souls and cacodemons blowing up from being shot gunned
Plasma rifling through zombies
Doomguy fights hand to hand with Pinkies
More potions, armor, helmets and ammo picked up everywhere
Montage slows down to a stop...
Baron of Hell spot where Doomguy just hides and it walks by
There are gooey bodies all over in Deimos lab
When they find the BFG's case, its empty.
The BFG is gone! Follow the trail of gooey bodies! (BFG makes bodies turn to goo)
They finally find the man who’s carrying the BFG
He explains there's a way off Deimos on Tower of Babel
When Deimos and Hell merged as one, the Tower of Babel was built over the portal
But the Tower of Babel is home to the cyberdemon
BFG Man was going to meet up with his comrades at the tower
BFG has charge enough for one last shot into the cyberdemon
BFG Man dies, turns into zombie.
BFG zombie man is shot in the body and before he can be shot in the head...
Baron breaks through a pane of glass in the background
Baron tears through the party and kills people
Baron grabs someone’s waist and heats up its plasma fist
That person is melted in half!
BFG Zombie wears armor
BFG Zombie is shot to death, Baron throws Doomguy into crusher
Baron charges up its plasma fist
The crusher comes down and the Doomguy rolls out of the way
Crusher nearly smashes Doomguy
Doomguy shotguns Baron who falls back and its hand gets crushed
Doomguy runs
Cat and mouse vs Baron inside of a lab with dead specimens
Eventually the Doomguy wins the battle

He looks out a window up at the Tower of Babel.
He fixtures his space helmet on and steps out of an air lock
He leaves the Deimos complex to the Deimos surface
Then he walks toward the giant tower beneath a hell sky
A breif killing montage as the Doomguy works his way up the tower
Imps crawling the walls, pinkies charging, cacos flying, blood falls
Slaughtered human sacrifices strung up, hideous walls of human skin
Come up through the center to fight Cyberdemon!
The montage quickly slows as the Doomguy is at the top
Imps are tied on marble pillars to feed the cyberdemon
Cyberdemon eats the head off an imp!
Behind the cyberdemon is a ray of light coming down from the hellsky
Its the portal and has swirling light
Other security officers are there and fail to defeat the cyberdemon
They are all slaughtered by the cyberdemon's rockets
One is stepped on by its cybernetic leg!
One paranoid man (in shock) with white hair stays hidden and speaks to the Doomguy
He says that portal leads deeper into Hell and the cyberdemon is the gatekeeper
He only came with his group for protection and now they're all dead

The Doomguy is confident his BFG will take down the cyber demon
BFG misses... lights up the sky with green killing a sea of lost souls flying around up there...
BFG is empty and needs a cell
The Doomguy dodges rockets and explosions out of an 80s action movie
The Doomguy finds a cell and cyberdemon takes a BFG shot to the crotch
Cyberdemon is thrown backward and dead on the ground
Doomguy drops the BFG and races toward the portal / anomaly (with the cyberdemon between them)
Time is moving slow, its a long distance to the portal (but not slow motion)
He gets a short distance from the cyberdemon and the portal, before a rocket screams by him
The cyberdemon still alive, but cracked & torn
It begins to get up still glowing with green from BFG
Doomguy empties his shotgun into demon’s head and then pistol all while running forward.
Then the cyberdemon is nearly fully standing
Doomguy pulls the chainsaw off his back
Chainsaws its non robotic leg
Cyberdemon throws him nearly the distance of the courtyard
Fires rockets, Doomguy dodges them
Blinding speed forward with the chainsaw
Doomguy leaps into the air with a chainsaw swipe at cyberdemon's heart
Doomguy lands, then FULLY chainsaws off its non cybernetic leg and it falls back
Cyberdemon fires a rocket on its back that is a near miss
Doomguy chainsaws its head off!
Overhead shot
The rocket arm goes limp and the Doomguy grabs a horn and drags the cyberdemon head away from its body
Sickening display, the Doomguy drops to his knees
The ray of portal light stands ominously before him

End movie

Last edited by geo on 06-09-11 at 02:36

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