darkreaver
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Registered: 05-08 |
The Lobby has potentional. Lose the god awful text/font, and the extremely tacky airbrush-like fog need some work imo.
Also the composition of the image isnt good. Its way to heavy on the right side, and the second closest hand (the one to the right) should NOT be cut at the top.
So I guess what I mean is, move everything a bit to the left and a little down.
I may sound harsh, but deal with it ;)
edit: I like the simplicity of Black Sun, too. The bomb/smoke just needs to be moved a little bit to the left. That makes for good composition.
edit 2: do I see a face in the smoke/bomb clouds? Thats really tacky. I like the picture because what I think when I see it is "silence", even though its a fucking a-bomb detonating. Good atmosphere. The face just ruins it ;)
edit 3: You should rename Black Sun to Broccoli Man
Last edited by darkreaver on 03-08-12 at 01:16
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