Sharessa Posted January 14, 2012 Here's a short little something I wrote, while I'm practicing my writing skills. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EveM80viiiddiCdS6xfRCOOQUiTLPyqlE3PteZqcokw/edit Enjoy! Oh, by the way, it contains ponies. Just thought you should know. 0 Share this post Link to post
DoomUK Posted January 14, 2012 Heh, that was curiously enjoyable. I've got one piece of really anal nitpicking though:- He made a b-line through the hallway entrance and straight down the passageway. It's "beeline", not "b-line". ;-) 0 Share this post Link to post
Sharessa Posted January 14, 2012 DoomUK said:Heh, that was curiously enjoyable. I've got one piece of really anal nitpicking though:- It's "beeline", not "b-line". ;-) Whoops! The funny thing is that I knew that. Fixed. 0 Share this post Link to post
