Earth Invasion

The dust swirelled on the ground,without care of who or what was in its path,much like the demons themselves.The stink of rotting bodies filled the hot air.Blood flowed through the cracks in the hard,dry ground.The occasional howl,however not from wolves,but from creatures from the dark pits of hell.Your ship slams into the ground like it was thrown to the ground by an angry giant.Inside the ship alarms blarred and you were jolted around.The ship makes a sudden stop,you are tossed forth slamming you face against the console,causing you to lose your front tooth.Oh well,you think as you shrug you shoulders,at least your nose bone didnt jam into your brain.You grab your Colt Single Action Army revolver and jump out the open hatch.You look up at the sky,expecting to see blue,instead the sky is a bright,bloody red.What the fuck is this,you wonder.Screams resound and people run away from a city being followed by Demons,Imps and Zombies.You shoot a zombie,making blood and gore spray in all directions.You grab his shotgun.Whoa,a double barrel shotgun.You blast an Imp and its chest is blown apart.Looks like the demons have invaded Earth.Is there a resistance,Some militia.And where are the armed forces.Fuck it,if you could take down swarms of these monsters on Deimos and Phobos then on Earth it must be to your advantage.You grab some shells from the zombie's belt and put two in your shotgun and the rest on your belt as you approach the city...

So...what do ya think?PT.2 coming soon...

Quick note: hard returns are your friend. Break stories up into paragraphs and possibly put a line between them so the story is more spread out and is easier to read.

thanks for the tip.My english teacher sucks then cause this is how I always right and he said it was perfect.Then again the guy smokes weed before school and drinks coffee every 5 minutes.