Anyone want to test part of a map for me?

I thought i'ld attempt to make a level in the "Hell-Revealed" style, and by that I mean a map where you are required to use quick reflexes, aggressive actions, and good use of the architecture to help you beat the map rather than a mindless monster bash where you merley hold down the trigger on the BFG until the thousands of monsters are dead. I was wondering if anyone out there would like to play over my opening area (I have done more, but i'll keep that hidden for now), and let me know if they feel I am on the right track? You can find the map at:

http://www.geocities.com/bat_on/test1.zip

Cheers, Phil

p.s. ignore the texture misalginments for now...

EDIT: Forgot to mention its for any Doom2 limitless source port.

It's a good start. But it's not nearly hard enough. I beat it w/o dying, and I'm drunk and half-asleep.