It was pretty fun, though it looked strange in some places. It was a bit short, though as part of a set of maps, it should be good. I hope to see more!
I had many problems with the texture offsets but I think its fine.
At shot 1 you start.
At shot 2 you went in the room seen at the left site of shot 1, and at shot 3 you walked over the cratetop and teleportet up to the monster "Bunker".
It is good to edit your posts,and avoid double posting (well,seven in a row posting in your case) :P.
About the mapset,it looks quite fine from the screens,but nothing i would be interested to play.