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Story so far (scroll down for tl;dr):

UAC.

The God damned motherfucking UAC.

I couldn't have cared less about whatever fuck-ups they do out there in the space. That's none of my business - it's their business.

But when they bring that fucking Hell on Earth? That's my business.

It feels like ages, like we have been going on fighting for years. A losing battle. Not a single victory. They only keep coming. To my Earth, no less.

That's when our recon team found out about a secret UAC facility deep inside the mountains, right on our backyard. No one had known about it, no one knew that those fuckers had been doing their god forsaken shit right under our noses.

And that's when they they told us, that this facility was one of the few connected to the UAC stations out there, on the moons of Mars, by those teleportation things.

That, was the first good news we had heard in a long, long time. The enemy was right there. Their supply lines were right there. We could strike them. We could destroy the teleportation system, get the Hell out, clean up the mess outside and be victorious.

We were so going to do it.

...

It was a good plan too. It would have been a damn good plan too. Gather our best men, form up a small team to sneak in to the base and give them Hell.

We had everything planned. Absolutely everything...except the part where they laid waiting to ambush us before we even got inside.

None of us died though, I think. Maybe that would have been better, lose one or two men but move on as a group. But no, we didn't die, I can still hear them through the radio, somewhat.

We didn't die. The bastards separated us.

The voices are starting to die down.

...

Did they die?

No, they couldn't die. They're just deep enough that the radio won't work.

...I hope. Because if they're dead, it's all up to me.

Again.

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esselfortium said:
Looks nice, though I don't like the liteblu structure in the first shot. All the 8x8 columns in a row look rather garish to me.

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traversd said:
Hey Printz, I think Essel is onto something. I reckon you could keep the style if the column was round, not square. This will change the view of each liteblu section slightly.

oh and then make it glow. reactors are always round are they not? ;)

-travers

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st.alfonzo said:
Two things; both of which are fairly menial. You can get stuck between the wall and the sewage vats/valves - the structures the individual zombies are standing on - prior to entering the tunnels near the start of the map, forcing one to noclip out.

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spoiler - highlight to read:

There's one area in the map that contrasts pretty much from everything else...can you find it???

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NaturalTvventy said:
stuff

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Jodwin said:

I just uploaded the map to /idgames after fixing the getting stuck issue st.alfonzo mentioned. I'll update the thread with a link to the archives once it's there...

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Kyka said:
Will the updated version of the map have the same link on akinomori as the original link? I only ask coz this level has been cacoward nominated and obviously you want the links in the cacoward thread to point to the latest version.

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