Buu342
Green Marine
Posts: 47
Registered: 05-12 |
Alwaysdoomed said:
Ok not to discourage you from mapping but this map has alot of flaws.
The unannounced deathpits are annoying as fuck. Please remove them. The crusher and insta death acid at the first part of the map needs to be removed because i know most people will quit playing at that point.
This map is horribly linear, despite what i first though that you could kill any part of the body you wanted to, but boy was i wrong. The map is but a single path and you kill organs in 1 designated path.
The shotgun is useless in this map because of all the high tier enemies. I suggest putting in the super shotgun instead.
The spine area was horrible as shit. It took me about 30 saves to reach the end of it. I didnt know this was a jumpmaze map. Redo the spine area so its not so much of a horrible compact jumpmaze of evil headache headplants into your keyboardness......
Now on the lighter side of things. This map was pretty unique in its theme and thats the only thing that kept me playing, because i wanted to see what else there was.
Ok so i said alot of mean shit about your map, but dont get bent out of shape and say "fuck mapping everyone here is a bunch of haters".
The only reason im telling you this is because i want to help you see the flaws in your map, learn from it and make it better.
Heres some suggestions to greatly improve your map and make it more fun and worth while to play.
Remove the insta death pits, some are ok but make sure their easy to detect. Make the map nonlinear by allowing the player to choose which organ they want to take out first. Dont make box rooms. Remember the inside of animals/or demons arnt box or rectangle shaped structures. Make the map curved and oddly shaped. If your going to put strong monsters in please dont add weak weapons like the shotgun. Noone wants to shoot barons and hecubus with a shotgun.
Also please for the love of god, DONT MAKE THIS A JUMPMAZE!!
Keep up the good work dude and remember dont take my criticism personally, keep practicing your mapping.
Alright thanks! I was already planning on getting rid of the crusher in the begining of the map in the first place. Ill try to add a few more detail. As of the spine, im not quite sure on what to do with it then...
As of the shotgun, ill se how i can get rid of it, or atleast get rid of the stronger enemies.
When you are on the way of entering the egg boss fight, there is an underwater path that splits into three. I was going to warn the player that they could get a different weapon each path, and a weapon you could only get once in this game. It was the double shotgun, the rocket launcher, or the plasma gun.
Last edited by Buu342 on 11-16-12 at 07:35
|
10-11-12 21:25 
