Knee Deep in the Waste

A fun medium sized map. Nothing extraordinary here. Maybe slightly cramped at times. Good ammo balance on ultraviolence. Tho plasmarifle was quite unneccesary.

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Average wad, mostly dark and lots of nukage, mostly small monsters. Sometimes not easy to know where to go next. Sky windows give HOM on Zdoom. 3/5

Very impressive first effort. There were some rather obvious HOMs where I'm guessing you meant to have sky (in some of the hallways heading to the red key, mostly), although I'm guessing it's just a zdoom issue. Anyway, keep up the good work.

Quite nice indeed. The HOM effects in ZDoom are unfortunate, though, as is the inclusion of three Doombuilder objects which show up as "!" sprites. Still, I give it a 4/5.

Keep up - you have the talent - Daniel ****

Good layout. As others have said, many instances with HOM in zdoom. But given I love your email address, I'll give it a 3.

Was this made with SLIGE?

rather impresiv for a beginer wad with some help you cood become an exlint wad builder keep it up -simon cowel

Too much focus on detail and not enough on fun gameplay. Like, I simply loved walking over the same acid for the 5th time trying to work out where to go next. --- 3 Stars.

Nice wad but only averange. I see you used doom builder. Maybe not so common among wad authors but it RULES. But for being your first map its good. (3/5)

Very impressive for a first map! And fun too, which usually isn't the case with first timers. -Dittohead

I don't care if this is your first map. You had all the time in the world to design and test this map and if it's rubbish, it's rubbish. This has an attractive design and clearly isn't shit put out by a chancer, but it has some obvious technical errors and a confusing level design. I have seen a very few levels that used slime well, and this isn't one of them. Take that, Jamaica!