My First Wad.

If this is your first wad, I don't want to see any of your other wads. 0/5

Very lame. Avoid this crap at all costs. 0/5

Your first wad, eh? Hope it's your LAST!

You shouldn't have bothered.

Preety good

0 stars for racism

Horseshit. 0 stars

Logan MTM talking... Got Five stars only to be a new DOOM maping. Continue that way and some day you will be a great WAD maker. 5/0

ok... for a first wad... :/

This just shows that the author can make an icon of sin work correctly in a 1994 map. 12 gorilla anuses. -z34chris

I take it this is a joke wad. If not, it is well below par even for a newbie WAD. It's bad, plain and simple. No point in pointing out why or where - if you can't see why, you fail it!

It's a test level. My first wad was way better, but it was boring. This is not boring, but you don't really play this map, because one shot and the level is over, wtf? 1/5

YOU FAIL AT MAPPING!!! um... trying to think of something constructive to say here... not coming up with a lot. kudos at least for kinda figuring out how to do teleporters... --Jehar

This is just junk. Try again, but don't make it public until you have got some feedback from other people and there is some reason to believe anyone other than yourself will be interested in playing it. BTW, giving your own map 5 stars when you know it is dreadful is a fail.

Very poor design. 1-2 hours? I could make shit like this in 5 minutes in Doom Builder. -Mr. Chris

you have got to be fucking kidding me

Work on the level design, and you'll get something decent. Doombuilder's easy to learn. 1/5 for the effort; I'll at least consider this "incomplete". -zepolleon

hahahha, wow 0 stars -Johnny

One of my rules of thumb is that, if a level is less than 10kb, it's probably poor. This is a slaughter-style map that pits you against 13 cyberdemons in a big room. In total the level has four sectors. You have to kill John Romero to exit. It takes about fifteen seconds to do. You have loads of rockets and plasma, although there's no plasma gun or BFG. For such a tiny level there are lots of mapping errors - misaligned teleport, missing sprites etc.

How can you use a fantastic editor like DoomBuilder and _still_ come up with something this infantile?

really? im 13 and i can map better than that.