Syndicate

A bit bland and a bit short. Overall kind of forgettable (the archie area is nicely done - though you can make it easy by pacifisting your way through it). 3 stars seems about right. youkai444 should make more maps - the basic skills are there. Oh, and drop the "If you have this text file, YOU HAVE THE WAD" crap from the text-file. It's possible to have the txt without the wad, and in that case this message is both annoying and unhelpful.

It's good for a first attempt, especially the gameplay. Judging from the traps and monster usage your future maps will be nice and hard, just the way I like 'em. Overall it's still a 3/5 - Belial

It's OK, but not more.

Good,detail and lighting are fine.Monster placement needs somework. Hellknoght in first level? for a beginner 4/5

This is dated June 2006, and it's not bad. The design is vintage 1995 (there's nothing obviously source-porty about it, and there are lots of texture errors) but the gameplay is sound. It's a kind of dungeon / techbase with 59 mostly weak monsters, and a very linear layout; one good revenant battle. Suffers from the fact you can run past a fair amount of baddies and it really needed a bit of polish.

and ok is the equivalent of a 3 in my book

Unrealistic detailing with no logic behind it, unbalanced battles. Good attempt for a first map, but lots of room to improve. 2/5

Nice first map. The start looks awesome. As the level progress the detail seems to decay. Gameplay is fine. without surprises. For the next level focus on bring a balanced design through most rooms. More puzzles switches or secrets would be great too. 3-3.5/5