Fellowzdoomer's 1 Hour Map

I understand that you did it in an hour but... was it necessary to put the enemies in the Spawn?

From there on it improves a lot, especially the ending, it's good but the first impression is very bad.

Good enough. I liked it.

While better than some of author's other work, this isn't good even being a speedmap made on a phone. It's a few hallways, one key, and some tight encounter with an Arch-Vile and two Pain Elementals. Otherwise, it's bland and uninteresting.

Being built in an hour might be of interest in a contest, but the player is more concerned how it plays. I couldn't get past the big fight (Archvile, two pain elementals, chaingunners) as I ran out of ammo, yet there is plenty beyond it when no longer needed. Needs more polish, perhaps another half-hour.

Ok, you've worked for 1.5 hour, and then you have a very primitive level. Congratulations. Now my question is: what do you want to prove? IOW: what's it's additional value? Mind that when one plays a level, it's all about gameplay - the build time is totally irrelevant. And the gameplay of your level is imho, sorry if you don't like it: plain awful. So 1/5 - this efford might be of interest only in it's special class, in which case also 1/5.

3 stars. Keep working at it!

Sorry, but this just feels wrong and extremely unprofessional. Awfully linear and bland structure, uninteresting corridor fights (well, okay, they work). Since you're a beginner, Fellowzdoomer, you should better put more thought and care into your mapping to improve it, instead of 1-hour speedmapping. 1 star, for what the map really is in my view.

Certainly an improvement over the author's early works, and not bad for a one hour speedmap. The end was a bi harrowing though and I noticed a Demon stuck in a wall somehow: I'd recommend you give the map a test before uploading. 3 stars. - Obsidian

Buggy placement and the luck based endings are so uncool, yet the map is better then the other maps that FellowZdoomer makes.

Pretty good for one hour. A lot better than I could do, I'm sure. I'd like to point out that it's not just one demon that's stuck in a wall. In Chocolate, one or both of the demons on the left lift prevents the lift from lowering. making it THREE demons that are stuck. Not that you can't kill them before you grab the key, anyway. Maybe you should fully conceal them next time. ***