What do you think of these two?

An update to my Doom Metal-styled art, I added these two (my recent ones I actually like)

Just want your thoughts-

http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/065/8/6/blood_ritual_by_yellowmadness54-d4ryge7.jpg

http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/065/e/a/guiding_light_by_yellowmadness54-d4ryh6p.jpg

Quality of the second one got smeary in the transition from camera, but you get the idea.

I keep the drawings simple, without much detail aside from the center piece. Much to that you'd expect from some of Candlemass's work or other, more underground doom bands.

I like it. I really need to learn to make my drawings more simple, I tend to use a mess of lines to form whatever objects I want to draw.

Marnetmar said:

I like it. I really need to learn to make my drawings more simple, I tend to use a mess of lines to form whatever objects I want to draw.

Thanks. Contrarely Im trying to learn to do mass detail. But I suck at land scapes and hazy with spacing.

Pretty good.

Coopersville said:

Pretty good.

Thanks.

I just noticed I spelled "two" wrong.

The drawings look nice! You did a nice job with them!

thanks a lot!

Two more, opinions please-

http://yellowmadness54.deviantart.com/#/d4tfhhz

http://yellowmadness54.deviantart.com/#/d4tfgq1

You need to start drawing gestures. Your drawings are droopy contour lines with no underlying structure and look flat and formless. I hated this advice when I was starting out but you have to do shitty and boring academic observational drawing for a while before you get the instinct for composing your own gestures.

yellowmadness54 said:

Two more, opinions please-

http://yellowmadness54.deviantart.com/#/d4tfhhz

http://yellowmadness54.deviantart.com/#/d4tfgq1

Those look nice too! I like how the two girls have their hair tied together in the first picture. Good job!

Thanks.
I took Banks advice as well, and started gesture drawings.

Keeping it simple.
Started with a stick figure base~
http://yellowmadness54.deviantart.com/#/d4tq1rw

yellowmadness54 said:

Keeping it simple.
Started with a stick figure base~
http://yellowmadness54.deviantart.com/#/d4tq1rw

I like this one too! You did a good job with it like the others!

They look pretty nice