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Dungeons and Dragons Fanfic - The Missionary

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A friend of mine has been working on a fantasy story revolving around an old Dungeons and Dragons character she used to/still (?) plays. I told her I'd pass it on as she's trying to build a readership so feel free to comment either on FFN or here. Comments and crits of course are welcome.

fanfiction.net/s/8011014/1/

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Got an email today:

Heya, just dropping you a note to let you know that a few things have been updated with the fiction piece I'm working on. Chapter 1 got a fairly substantial rewrite with some bits added and volume 3 was updated as well. Below are the links for easy access, if you have any comments that I could use to improve or just a 'hey I enjoyed/didn't like this' please don't be shy about dropping it my way. :)

Have a great night!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8011014/1/ (Volume 1)
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8011014/2/The_Missionary (Volume 2 Chapter 1)
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8011014/7/The_Missionary (Volume 3 Chapter 1)

I gave the new stuff a read over and I gotta say it came out quite good. Feel free to take a read, I'm sure it'd be appreciated.

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So once again, the silly writer wannabe comes by with the tin cup clinking some coins within it and offering stories for those interested.

I uploaded today’s chapters (two of them in one go, hurray) and noticed I hit the 70 thousand word mark today. That’s a pretty beefy piece of work. Additionally, it’s also the 20th chapter of the entire piece!

So yes, I’m here to promote the work (again) and continue to solicit reviews and people’s thoughts on it. Good, bad or otherwise. I’d love nothing more than to hear what people think works or doesn’t. I’ve been trying very hard to improve my writing style and making it more ‘direct’ without all the fancy adjectives and stuff. I’m hoping this’ll draw more interest but if something else needs to be improved (like grammar! ) I’d love to hear it.

At some point in the future when this is all written out and such, I do plan on going back and giving it a coat of gloss. Do some serious editing and making it somewhat print worthy. However I need to know what’s right or wrong with the piece to do so! Give it a read and if you like it, please drop a note on the reviews! If you don’t like it, drop one anyway! I know it seems daunting at first but you’re not required to read the whole thing to form an opinion.

Anyway. Quick links are below. R&R would be greatly appreciated.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8011014/1/ Volume 1 - Prologue

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8011014/2/The_Missionary Volume 2 - Cold as Hell

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8011014/7/The_Missionary Volume 3 - All Hands on Deck

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8011014/17/The_Missionary Volume 4 - Book Worms

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So with the close of volume 6, I thought I’d re-post the little advert here. We’re down to 4 more chapters and then we’ll be done, then starts the long road of re-engineering things and putting it all together along with getting some cover/insert art (unfortunately, I’m so broke I can’t pay attention so that’s not been a possibility up to now.)

I’m burned out right now so forgive the brevity.

Kathrine Stoneriver is a young priestess in service to Chauntea who’s fallen into a portal taking her on a whirlwind tour of the multi-verse. Her new friend has a secret and holds a relic that can give someone anything they want, even godhood. Yet the people she’s stolen it from not only want it back, but know her secret.

The conflict will test every moral sense Kat has and in the end will force her to choose her duty as a friend or her duty to the gods she’s sworn to serve.

Rated T for some minor cursing and implied sexuality (nothing explicit, you needn’t fear blush factor)

Volume Break Down: (Each volume contains around 5 chapters)

Volume 1: Prologue
fanfiction.net/s/8011014/1/The_Missionary

Volume 2: Cold as Hell
fanfiction.net/s/8011014/2/The_Missionary

Volume 3: All Hands on Deck (Where Bree is introduced)
fanfiction.net/s/8011014/7/The_Missionary

Volume 4: Book Worms
fanfiction.net/s/8011014/17/The_Missionary

Volume 5: Dangerous Game
fanfiction.net/s/8011014/22/The_Missionary

Volume 6: Inter-Planar Travel Agents
fanfiction.net/s/8011014/27/The_Missionary

As always, any comments and critiquing is always welcomed. Those who’ve been sending them in, I thank you. ^^;

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Got another email today:

Hey there everyone,

For the last while I’ve been writing a fan fiction ~mostly~ based on CoA’s version of FR cannon that’s based on a character I played for a long while and after getting the second volume on it done, I thought I had a fairly significant body of work (in terms of word count) so I figured I’d share it and see if anyone out there might be interested in a little light Dungeons and Dragons fan fic reading.

I don’t know if there are many readers out there but I thought I’d put the link up anyway in hopes that someone might find it interesting and it’d keep me motivated to write more on it as well as work on other (salable) works.

Kathrine Stoneriver is a young priestess in service to Chauntea who’s fallen into a portal taking her on a whirlwind tour of the multi-verse. Her new friend has a secret and holds a relic that can give someone anything they want, even godhood. Yet the people she’s stolen it from not only want it back, but know her secret.

The conflict will test every moral sense Kat has and in the end will force her to choose her duty as a friend or her duty to the gods she’s sworn to serve.

Rated T for some minor cursing and implied sexuality (nothing explicit, you needn’t fear blush factor)

So, below is the link. Please feel free to send your thoughts to my PM box either good bad or indifferent or post them here if you don’t care whether or not others read them. If something doesn’t strike your fancy and you have ~constructive~ criticism to add, don’t feel you need to hold back, I have thick skin and I want to get better at the craft.

Volume Break Down: (Each volume contains around 5 chapters)

Volume 1: Prologue
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8011014/1/The_Missionary

Volume 2: Cold as Hell
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8011014/2/The_Missionary

Volume 3: All Hands on Deck (Where Bree is introduced)
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8011014/7/The_Missionary

Volume 4: Book Worms
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8011014/17/The_Missionary

Volume 5: Dangerous Game
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8011014/22/The_Missionary

Volume 6: Inter-Planar Travel Agents
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8011014/27/The_Missionary

Volume 7: Lost and Found
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8011014/33/The_Missionary

Volume 8: Time of Need
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8011014/37/The-Missionary

As of the start of Volume 8, we're at 130 thousand words. Plenty to sink your teeth into if you find the dish to your liking.

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