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Guest Nuno Correia

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Guest Nuno Correia

Haiku is cool
I thought it was hentai
Seems I am a pervert

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Guest Nuno Correia

I seem to be troubled
This maybe isn't haiku
Deadnail?

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Guest Malachai

Hey, that's all right. It's an understandable mistake. (I) We forgive you. Really. ;)

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Nuno Correia said:

I seem to be troubled
This maybe isn't haiku
Deadnail?

a haiku is

5 sylables
7 sylables
5 sylables
im pretty sure i spelled sylables wrong.

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Guest Nuno Correia

Now I'm getting it
I just need some practice now
I should play some Doom

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Ralphis said:

a haiku is

5 sylables
7 sylables
5 sylables
im pretty sure i spelled sylables wrong.

2 l's :)

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Nuno Correia said:

I seem to be troubled
This maybe isn't haiku
Deadnail?

Traditionally and ideally, a haiku presents a pair of contrasting images, one suggestive of time and place, the other a vivid but fleeting observation. Working together, they evoke mood and emotion. The poet does not comment on the connection but leaves the synthesis of the two images for the reader to perceive.

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Nuno Correia said:

I seem to be troubled
This maybe isn't haiku
Deadnail?

How many damn times
I hate my handle in caps
Please stop doing it


=)

Anyway, yeah, what Fod said.

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Nuno Correia said:

Now I'm getting it
I just need some practice now
I should play some Doom

Congratulations
You're getting the hang of it
Keep on practicing

(I know I should)

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Guest pickle_hammer

You are a pervert
Go download doomserv, pervert!
Or else I'll kill you

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Zeratul 982 said:

Congratulations
You're getting the hang of it
Keep on practicing

(I know I should)

Ok, ok... My turn now. =)

Too much coffee
Too little sleep
I hate dogs who bark at night

Naaah.... I suck at Haiku

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Guest ZarcyB

Disorder, that's wrong
You got the syllables wrong
This one is correct

However, at school,
I did these ages ago
And they sucked big time

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Doom Doom Doom Doom Doom
Doom Doom Doom Doom Doom Doom Doom
Doom Doom Doom Doom Doom

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Lazer said:

a haiku presents a pair of contrasting images

Hardly applies there does it? :)

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