My first good levels

This is my first good 2 levels that i made with "voice acting". Some of the voices dont work but there is also subtitles. hope you enjoy

Please give constructive criticism. Run in gzdoom for the best experience since Skulltag cant really run slopes for me.

The story is how his dog gets shot by Dr.Data and he wants revenge and fights the Brainiac

Made with Doom 2

2 levels with custom weapons from mainly Realm667. (look at credits in slade3)

Somewhat easy but fun for a first 

LINK: http://www.mediafire.com/file/jcj8tzfh4qscpif/reallygood1.2.wad

Where are the screenshots at

1 minute ago, Decay said:

Where are the screenshots at

making them atm

Okay.

Its a true masterpiece

Alright, if you want be serious mapper, you should say no for cardboard monsters. It puts negative impression for me. Besides, some intro parts, both maps are flat and you need play more good wads. 

1 minute ago, MysteriousHaruko said:

Alright, if you want be serious mapper, you should say no for cardboard monsters. It puts negative impression for me. Besides, some intro parts, both maps are flat and you need play more good wads. 

Ok thank you for the advice I apprecitate it

Though that fire effect in the status bar is quite cool to be honest :P

^{I'm not forced to dislike something just because the other things that come with it are bad dislikeable. Imagine Mona Lisa had cardboard eyes. Would that make her beautiful, glossy red lips bad too?}

ps: Next time you screenshot, use ZDoom's screenshot feature. Otherwise

Consider using a sky that tiles horizontally and not just vertically.