My first DooM map

I wanted to get into making DooM maps so my first map is mostly testing with doors and keys in order to get a feel for the program.

I used GZdoom builder and a DooM 2 wad. This is a single level map played like vanilla, mouselook is ok.

Here is a link to play the DooM wad yourself, I tested the map using GZdoom so make sure you use that.

Looking for constructive criticism, I'm excited to improve! 

https://drive.google.com/open?id=1S9vKBt5G87CyG-umnAyiku2Yv4YmdFcM

P.S. After playing this in Zandronum with Sgt. Marks Brutal Doom v21, I recommend playing like this for the best experience. 

Welcome to Doomworld!

It looks like you included most of the details in this post, so, kudos on that. But you did leave out a very important aspect: screenshots! Adding screenshots will help people get an idea of what to expect and will entice them to try your level.

23 minutes ago, Pegleg said:

Welcome to Doomworld!

 

It looks like you included most of the details in this post, so, kudos on that. But you did leave out a very important aspect: screenshots! Adding screenshots will help people get an idea of what to expect and will entice them to try your level.

Thanks, I re read the rules and added some screen shots, happy to be here on Doomworld!

Looking good for a first shot. Although, I can't download it, you need to set your link to be shareable.

Anyway, from what I can see in the screenshots, a couple of things stand out to me: your level looks very bright and could use some light/dark contrasts. Also, some variety in ceiling heights would go a long way in making your level look more dynamic.

9 minutes ago, BeachThunder said:

Looking good for a first shot. Although, I can't download it, you need to set your link to be shareable.

 

Anyway, from what I can see in the screenshots, a couple of things stand out to me: your level looks very bright and could use some light/dark contrasts. Also, some variety in ceiling heights would go a long way in making your level look more dynamic.

Alright, I edited the file in google drive, you should be able to download it, if not let me know.

Thanks for the feedback man!