renagade Posted December 22, 2005 i got my first level done ever, and it works for the most part, i know i am a newbie but i thought that i might as well let a couple people play it to see what needs to be tweaked in my building skill. i dont got a place to put the level up so if anyone wants to play it give me your Email and ill send them to you. 0 Share this post Link to post
-_DLD_- Posted December 22, 2005 Want to upload it for constructive criticism without having to subject yourself to /newstuff? Try uploading it somewhere like here. 0 Share this post Link to post
renagade Posted December 22, 2005 blah.. its being annoyingand it wont let me create an account, just give me your pass and ill send you the file.. e.e; 0 Share this post Link to post
-_DLD_- Posted December 22, 2005 I don't give out my password to anybody. This is another upload site. Just use Google if this doesn't work. 0 Share this post Link to post
renagade Posted December 22, 2005 Edit: I meant your -Email- not your password :( i hate my stupidity some times. 0 Share this post Link to post
SoldierOfFortune Posted December 22, 2005 I suppose you could use http://www.megaupload.com, but it's one of the slowest sites I've ever seen. You could make a Yahoo account and host them on Geocities. Or, you could bite the bullet and use /Newstuff. Okay, those aren't the greatest solutions but that's all I can think of. EDIT: Also, it generally isn't a good idea to release your first level, or your fifth, or your twelfth. But if you really think this is good enough for public release, I won't stop you. 0 Share this post Link to post
-_DLD_- Posted December 22, 2005 SoldierOfFortune said:EDIT: Also, it generally isn't a good idea to release your first level, or your fifth, or your twelfth. But if you really think this is good enough for public release, I won't stop you. Meh, I did just to get some constructive criticism, since nobody flamed me. I just got basic pointers I could take into account next time I made the level. Just don't release anything "newbish" in /newstuff or you will get laughed at. Ah yes...about the e-mail. Remember, if you want to e-mail somebody, try clicking there first. I'm one of those who disabled hidden e-mail addresses. 0 Share this post Link to post
Dutch Doomer Posted December 22, 2005 Any screens might help to get some good feedback on your map. Try this one: http://rapidshare.de/ 0 Share this post Link to post
renagade Posted December 22, 2005 well i finally got it to work.. so heres the wad i made http://www.ripway.com/members/files.asp?path= ._.; soo much trouble.. 0 Share this post Link to post
renagade Posted December 22, 2005 http://h1.ripway.com/Renagade002/Folder Name//DOOM0000.png http://h1.ripway.com/Renagade002/Folder Name//DOOM0001.png here are two screen shots of two diffrent places... i would have gotten more but i died after taking the screen shots. edit: Ignore those... links.. freaking links are giving me no end to trouble -_- 0 Share this post Link to post
Dutch Doomer Posted December 22, 2005 Doesn't look too bad for an first effort, I see its an pretty dark level. 0 Share this post Link to post
renagade Posted December 22, 2005 well its dark for a reason ( which i will explain now. ) This level is the first level in a megawad I want to do (named Dantes inferno after the peice of writing with the same basic theme.) well anyways the plot goes like this: after you have Defeated the two demon lords in "plutonia" and "evilution" You have sucummbed to your wounds, not from blood loss but by a virus that you picked up: an infection that took you in your sleep. the day after your body is placed in a casket and then into a stone tomb that they built for there biggest hero ( You had to have something to show your efforts for the earth.) Well a couple days past and your soul is pulled from its slumber: heaven has decided that you have been judged as unpure. (which isnt true, but hells influance forced this on your soul.) and it turns out your fate lies within your enternal trip.. from your grave to the deepest pits in hell.. (( well the level i put here is the crypt.. its dark because its usually dark. i fixed some of the stuff i missed in some of the rooms and im working on the second level as we speak. and thanks for those who gave my little level any attention, and thanks for the critism i have gotten so far. )) Edit: It turns out that this will be just a test level, as i have found a gothic textures pack and start on a new level for the first one.. but my thanks for your critisisms and your playing my level is duely noted. 0 Share this post Link to post
SoldierOfFortune Posted December 22, 2005 I can't see your screenshots; the link seems broken. This is just a suggestion, but you may want to host them at http://www.imageshack.us; it's an excellent image hosting site. 0 Share this post Link to post
renagade Posted December 22, 2005 thank you, but.. when i get some screenshots of the level im working on now, i will put it on a website that i got ( well an msn group ) 0 Share this post Link to post
SyntherAugustus Posted December 22, 2005 you know you can just read the newstuff faq. http://www.doomworld.com/vb/showthread.php?s=&threadid=31922 0 Share this post Link to post
Dutch Doomer Posted December 22, 2005 SoldierOfFortune said:I can't see your screenshots; the link seems broken. This is just a suggestion, but you may want to host them at http://www.imageshack.us; it's an excellent image hosting site. Copy and paste one of the two links in your adress bar and hit enter, it works for me. 0 Share this post Link to post
SoldierOfFortune Posted December 22, 2005 Ah, I see now; I was confused because URLs don't normally contain spaces. It's excellent for a first attempt, but I think you should either brighten it up a bit or add some light-amp goggles. 0 Share this post Link to post
renagade Posted December 22, 2005 i did add a pair, in the hall with all the imps ( right with a second supershotgun and the blue keycard. ) but in the next map ill add more. 0 Share this post Link to post
pcorf Posted December 24, 2005 Send me the map in a zipfile along with a .txt file and I will upload it to the archives for you. pcorfiatis@our.net.au 0 Share this post Link to post
renagade Posted December 24, 2005 pcorf said:Send me the map in a zipfile along with a .txt file and I will upload it to the archives for you. pcorfiatis@our.net.au I will get to it as soon as i get it redone with a few other maps.. i plan to use it in a wad as soon as i can find an idea for the second level. 0 Share this post Link to post