Another

Everyone know i love to post anything that i create just for feedback. and this time i think people might actually enjoy.
so plz criticize. and guess what, i actually lower unpegged all of my doors.

http://files.filefront.com/The+Shortwad/;10225293;/fileinfo.html

I beat this in less than a minute. The first level was too cramped. The texture choice was poor. Felt like 1994 all over again.

Janitor's right. It took me longer to download this than to actually play it. I still didn't find it to be terribly interesting, though at least you're getting better. I've got an idea. If you haven't already, you ought to play Icarus: Alien Vanuard. Then pick out a map you like from it and try to mimic its design. Don't copy it, of course, but rather use it for inspiration. Like Janitor said, you've got some oldschool design preferences, and Icarus did a good job at it. After you make a map in this fashion, you can check back with us then to show us your work.

and you are the guy that bashed on some father/son team effort?

Spend a bit more time checking texture alignment. Try to stick to a texture theme - Map01 had too many texture changes, Map02 was better in that regard. The bars in the middle of Map02 need fixing.

Janitor said:

I beat this in less than a minute.

Speedrunning showoff! :-)

Give your threads more relevant and descriptive titles, please.

so what's the best wad I've created so far