Horror Posted January 28, 2010 This is my first actual map I was working on so I am pretty new but I wanted to post some screens to get some feedback on how it looks. Its called Shotgun Manor. Tell what you guys think 0 Share this post Link to post
DuckReconMajor Posted January 28, 2010 Looks pretty good. But why does that silver box thing have a door texture on it? 0 Share this post Link to post
Horror Posted January 28, 2010 Eh idk probably just a few line defs I meant to change 0 Share this post Link to post
pavera Posted January 28, 2010 DuckReconMajor said:Looks pretty good. But why does that silver box thing have a door texture on it? Maybe it's a refrigerator. 0 Share this post Link to post
gemini09 Posted January 28, 2010 DuckReconMajor said:Looks pretty good. But why does that silver box thing have a door texture on it? wow............... 0 Share this post Link to post
Horror Posted January 28, 2010 yeah that ssupposed to be a fridge. Looks rlly bad imo 0 Share this post Link to post
DuckReconMajor Posted January 28, 2010 Oh that's a kitchen. I saw the wooden chair/table and assumed office. 0 Share this post Link to post
MSPaintR0cks Posted January 28, 2010 Looks great. Reminds me of this one creepy wad where you walk around in a rundown town with demonic clowns and deformed flying faces constantly trying to kill you. But the rooms and the furniture look like a cyberdemon would live in there. I wonder how many tasty dead marines would fit into this gigantic refrigerator. (= 0 Share this post Link to post
Guest Posted January 29, 2010 Well there have been, what, 3 or 4 posts about the refrigerator so far in this thread. So that would surely make it the most famous refrigerator ever put into a Doom level. Quite an achievement, that. I might have to play this level soon. 0 Share this post Link to post
GreyGhost Posted January 29, 2010 The bookcase in screenshot two appears to lack depth.DuckReconMajor said:Oh that's a kitchen. I saw the wooden chair/table and assumed office. That "table" is a butcher block, every good kitchen has one. :P 0 Share this post Link to post
lupinx-Kassman Posted January 29, 2010 I like the general look of the map. One suggestion that comes right to mind though is to change the flat in the kitchen to something other then flat20. That flat usually doesn't look very good when it is stretched over large surfaces IMO. 0 Share this post Link to post
Horror Posted January 29, 2010 I can change that! Yeah Some of the architecture might be questionable. I am just starting to learn how to make "good" looking sectors and stuff like that. I thought the mood of the level turned out good though. Oh and sorry for not quoting about the bookshelf but there is depth, In the screenshot I just took it of the front :P And I expect it to be out maybe by the end of the day or this weekend. (I made a door to the fridge thats wedged open and I fit about 3 marines in there ;D) Heresa few more pics 0 Share this post Link to post