Facility, first crack at a full map & first I've uploaded.

[STNpotato]

It's just a single map made using doom builder & a Doom II wad as the base, made for GZdoom, I made a couple textures for the map, one of which you can see in the screenshot below. also the name is vague because I don't know what else to call it.

Jumping & crouching is necessary to traverse the ventilation to get to otherwise inaccessible rooms, the demons won't just hand over the keys so you'll have to invite yourself in.

also you can use freelook if you want.

 

I appreciate any feedback to help improve.

Download: Facility.zip

[meapineapple]

This was good, especially for a first map. I was confused by how the map ended abruptly, and slightly disappointed that I didn't get to finish the fight at the helipad, and I noticed a couple of very minor texturing issues. I also think that the yellow key trap could have been more aggressive; I had been anticipating a more difficult encounter there and was a little disappointed by what popped out. But except for that I have no complaints about the monster placement, which was quite good throughout, and the map is nice to look at.

 

Keep at it! I'd love to see more maps from you.

 

Here is a video of my playthrough:

 

 

[Aquila Chrysaetos]

This looks pretty good for a first map. I'll take a look at it in the next couple days.

[STNpotato]

Thanks for the feedback, I'll update the map & re-upload at a later time

11 hours ago, meapineapple said:

This was good, especially for a first map. I was confused by how the map ended abruptly, and slightly disappointed that I didn't get to finish the fight at the helipad, and I noticed a couple of very minor texturing issues. I also think that the yellow key trap could have been more aggressive; I had been anticipating a more difficult encounter there and was a little disappointed by what popped out. But except for that I have no complaints about the monster placement, which was quite good throughout, and the map is nice to look at.

 

Keep at it! I'd love to see more maps from you.

 

Here is a video of my playthrough:

 

 

Thanks for the feedback, tbh I cringed when I saw the couple texture errors XD, but I'm glad they were brought to light, I will update the map & maybe extend the length.