eternalone

[hurricane hoatzine]

it my first doom 2 map 

onebyone.7z

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i rename it to in eternal1.4

eternal1.4.zip

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new map 6 update 

 eternalone1.7.zip

i change some maps

here some muisc to go with it

 https://www.dropbox.com/sh/zkfpuzh2d9yjgzm/AADtRa8BzZMWclkhjmtgzqqMa?dl=0

 

Edited October 27, 2020 by hurricane hoatzine : add

[UndeadRyker]

Please read this: 

Anyway, this is a GZDoom map (there's technically two but that looks like an unfinished map) since there's flats being used as walls, stealth monsters, marines, etc. It's a typical and fairly plain first map since it's full of simple squares for the most part. The layout was extremely confusing, as most of the time I had no clue how to progress through most of MAP01. Shooting a random wall at one point of the map that's not even marked can be pretty infuriating to other players who play your maps. As a map author, you have to realize that players don't have half a clue on how to play your map. They don't know where every secret is and what every linedef can do. 

 

The other thing is the monsters just kinda seem thrown in there apart from the Cyberdemon, and maybe the arch-vile. Also, I can't seem to find where the exit is. Is this map beatable? This feels like one of these maps that should just be on your harddrive, not released. It should have been taken as a personal, private learning experience. Purely because it's hard to come up with any useful critiques and information that hasn't been repeated a thousand times someplace else on the forum. There's nothing really much else to say to give a more personal review. I'm sorry if I come off as harsh, but keep on mapping, I can't wait to see you improve!

[hurricane hoatzine]

Ok sorry i did not explain my level 

the end or the level is the icon of sin texture end the map,that a reference to sigil 

I do think about how other people think

The least one was more confusion and impossible 

So i redone it

Yes it beatable to 100 percent 

It hard to set secrets up. I have 1 secrets but i do not know how to set it up and to teleportal

I trying to be more comparablewith mod like brutal doom or d4d 

Think you

 

Edited December 9, 2019 by hurricane hoatzine : Miss spell

[hurricane hoatzine]

I just set it so i can test it online 

[Redfive11]

I really like the archvile placement, kinda like a wizard on top of a tower thats shooting spells at you. Very interesting.

Otherwise, theres not enough ammo to kill all the enemys in the level without cheats or punching people. Also, its not good (in my opinion) to set the spawn to where you can immediately get shot, and there was no ending on the 2nd level.

 

But i played it in vanilla GZdoom, so maybe it depends.

[st0agie]

Not bad for a first

[Tobby]

It's definitely not that bad for a first wad.

Despite the fact that there are some very obvious flaws for example map2 being unfinished (or at least i think it is) and map1 being quite confusing, You should definitely keep on mapping and i'm sure somewhere down the road you will make some absolutely amazing wads!

[hurricane hoatzine]

Here one the old ones

I deleted this level 

 

[hurricane hoatzine]

[hurricane hoatzine]

I forget to add something

onebyone1.5.zip

 

Not done yet

 

Edited December 14, 2019 by hurricane hoatzine

[hurricane hoatzine]

No jumping or free look in less your whoseing a gameplay mode

 

[DavidN]

You're on your way :) As a next step, perhaps try experimenting with height variation more - the maps here resemble Rise of the Triad maps with tall walls and open skies, which is an unusual but interesting kind of style. Also play through some other people's WADs to get ideas for how to design encounters, set up obstacles and generally make maps interesting.

[hurricane hoatzine]

in map01 do not shoot the vile unless he is active. makes baron and hell infight by making hit the barrel

infight is the key of the first level or map.

I working on map02 47% done. doing it my spare time

 

and i forget beware of trap everwhere

Edited December 19, 2019 by hurricane hoatzine

[hurricane hoatzine]

I redo the map because it got corrupted 

[hurricane hoatzine]

[hurricane hoatzine]

Soon

[Sir Hattington]

11/10 WAD, it may only be January fourth, but I know that this is going to be the best WAD of 2020.

[hurricane hoatzine]

And I forgot 

If you don't find a secret you probably screwed

Or not if you some hardcode pro or just luck

Map 02 is 69% complete 

[hurricane hoatzine]

map 02 is done

my plan is to have 5 or more map in the wad or mega wad

onebyone2.5.7z

[hurricane hoatzine]

delete

 

Edited October 27, 2020 by hurricane hoatzine

[hurricane hoatzine]

On 1/6/2020 at 6:01 PM, hurricane hoatzine said:

map 02 is done

my plan is to have 5 or more map in the wad or mega wad

onebyone2.5.7z

 

On 12/21/2019 at 4:21 PM, hurricane hoatzine said:

So

[Sir Hattington]

On 1/8/2020 at 2:53 PM, hurricane hoatzine said:

 

Why is your crosshair so big?

[hurricane hoatzine]

I did not notice that it did not bother me that much 

[hurricane hoatzine]

All  heill to doom eternal 

I hop there will be mod like d4d ot d4v

[hurricane hoatzine]

I need help for map03 it keep saying No Player one start

Any help 

[Sir Hattington]

3 hours ago, hurricane hoatzine said:

I need help for map03 it keep saying No Player one start

Any help 

You have to put down a player one start.

[hurricane hoatzine]

I did

 

[UndeadRyker]

Are its difficulty options unchecked?

Edit:

Did you try this reply?

Edited January 19, 2020 by UndeadRyker

[hurricane hoatzine]

here 3.0 https://mega.nz/#!6iYkBQLa!D0DF74LTsIMYTgP2I7pRViIoP6Pou9GwoSPebO3Z5Xc

the file over 25 mb i do not know why

[UndeadRyker]

Just as expected, in MAP02, your exit line had its arg set to 1, so set it to 0. Anyway, as for why its size is so bloated, you have duplicate maps contained in a wad in the wad, somehow. And it contains extremely high quality music in FLAC format. If you can't figure out how to fix it, I could privately message you with a cleaned up, fixed version but please try to fix it yourself so you get more experience with Doom mapping and wad management. As for your updated maps I've played them again and I see a definite improvement. Keep it up!