Job Posted February 28, 2003 A few Doom haikus: The Armory Shells, cells and big guns, You are my tools and my friends Help me save mankind ----------- The Cyberdemon Marriage of flesh, wire Bear your rocket launcher well As I run in fear ----------- The BFG A vast sea of steel I heft you and grin widely As I charge my shot ------------------- Well, that's it for now. Maybe I'll try to make some actual poems with stanzas and rhyme schemes. :D 0 Share this post Link to post
Agnes Posted February 28, 2003 Great! :D The cyberdemon is my favourite. 0 Share this post Link to post
Job Posted February 28, 2003 Here's some more -- w00t: The Cheap Bastard Hidden from my sight Your gat riddles me with holes Die, chaingunner, die ----------------------------- The Eternal Fear Glock against hell fire? I know and fear you, baron I have wet my pants ----------------------------- Painful Awareness Why am I earthbound? I force myself to spring up Sadly, I can't jump (unless using a port) 0 Share this post Link to post
Hell_Baroness Posted February 28, 2003 Beautiful!!! *claps* I gotta go for the Cyberdemon's too :P 0 Share this post Link to post
DarkWolf Posted March 1, 2003 I usually dislike haiku in English, but these are pretty good. 0 Share this post Link to post
mewse Posted March 1, 2003 like sun rays of spring the BFG shines straight through tearing demon-flesh 0 Share this post Link to post
Lüt Posted March 1, 2003 Doom Doom Doom Doom Doom Doom Doom Doom Doom Doom Doom Doom Doom Doom Doom Doom Doom HAIKU!!! MORE POETRY!!! 0 Share this post Link to post
læmænt Posted March 1, 2003 Vulg@r said:Eh? These are senryu. They aren't haiku. 17 syllables don't make a piece of text a haiku. 0 Share this post Link to post
DarkWolf Posted March 1, 2003 Doesn't it have to deal with nature to technically be a haiku? Please, enlighten our ignorance... 0 Share this post Link to post
læmænt Posted March 1, 2003 DarkWolf said:Doesn't it have to deal with nature to technically be a haiku? Please, enlighten our ignorance... Yes. It can deal with humans, with certain restrictions. It can be humorous. But I don't think there can be haiku about doom. Haiku, btw, are split into two images and don't contain explicit emotions. 0 Share this post Link to post
Sharessa Posted March 1, 2003 Heh...what about Tanka? (I think I spelled that right). They're supposed to be like responses to Haiku or something, but I forget the details. 0 Share this post Link to post
