Traitors

[Julian]

[Naked Snake]

Nice, very well written. It's pretty gripping too. Better than any shit I've ever written, that's for damn sure.

[Rellik]

Good stuff, I love stories that show how enemies are really flip sides of the exact same coin. So, does the spawn die? Does he escape? You can't just leave us hangin here. :)

[Ultraviolet]

So I imagine the other one there was what, an imp? Adds a whole new dimension now to killing them in Doom... well, I mean, not like Imp Encounter didn't do that...

Heh. So that's where Doom fanfiction is headed now. Humanizing the demons.

[Julian]

BBG said:
Nice, very well written. It's pretty gripping too. Better than any shit I've ever written, that's for damn sure.

Thank you :)

Rellik said:
You can't just leave us hangin here. :)

That's the whole point of the ending actually :P

Ultraviolet said:
So I imagine the other one there was what, an imp?

Yes, I pictured it as an imp.

[Fredrik]

Opinion.

Edit: ok, this is good stuff :P stop spanking me now

[sargebaldy]

not bad, although i can't say it interested me terribly (not that any fan fic does). next time run stuff through a spelling and grammar check first though :P

[Johnatone]

Ultraviolet said:

Heh. So that's where Doom fanfiction is headed now. Humanizing the demons.

i dunno. that's kinda how my 'Slavery of the Mancubi' story was, ditto with 'Imp Encounter'. can't wait for 'CACOSE'.

julian, damn great job. hope you do a follow up or another story. i like the style.