My attempt

[DarkWolf]

I've been meaning to write something for Doom quite some time. Today I sat down and wrote the first chapter. It just sets up the story, so it probably won't be too exciting.

Chapter 1

I know Doom II says only the marine was left, but screw that, this is my fan fic.

[Melfice]

Pretty nice fanfic there DarkWolf :)

[beezee88]

interesting.
more!

[dsm]

Not bad, certainly not bad - write some more, and please write a onger piece next time ok?

[DarkWolf]

Since the feedback is good I'll write some more. I though it was kind of sort myself, I may go back and add some more detail.