Does this gun needs improving?

[Nmn]

Then tell me.

[Amaster]

Looks kinda like Espi's Unmaker.

[ducon]

It looks like the Quake Scourge of Armagon's laser gun with a skull and bones on it.

[boris]

It is a gun used by pirates that shoots either peg legs or hooks.

[wildweasel]

Something from R-One?

[Darkhaven]

An asshat launcher.

[Linguica]

It's obviously a Jolly Rogerifle

[Szymanski]

Parrot launcher
Canonball gun

[Bashe]

A gun

[DooMBoy]

Bashe said:

A gun

Best answer yet! :P

[Nmn]

ROFL

No it has nothing to do with pirates or parrots or hooks. (or R-One :)

But keep guessing.

*Amaster was close...

[boris]

Nmn said:

*Amaster was close...

Unfmaker!

[Bashe]

It's a gun that causes the world to shake and then uses a vaccuum to pull all the shaken enemies into the air into a blade that extends and shreds them to pieces using the strict formula: Q - ™ + a piece of Blueberry (it must be Blueberry!!!) pie x 69.54323423. Then, the shredded pieces get phased into nothingness by the secondary laser hidden on the gun. Then it gives you a ciggy.

Heh.

[Amaster]

Nmn said:

*Amaster was close...

EspiMaker?

[Nmn]

Oh man, You ppl crack me up :D
It's the Unmaker (weapon made of demons' bones anyone?). Too bad I only had some jokes and no tips on improving it or so.
Where's Action Steve when You need 'em?!

[boris]

Nmn said:

Too bad I only had some jokes and no tips on improving it or so.

Maybe you should ask for tips next time?

[Nmn]

Ok, so how can I improve it?

[boris]

Make it look less cartoon-ish.

[Nmn]

Cool, but could You be more precise in that statement?
What makes it appear cartoonish (doesn't seem that to me) :/

EDIT: FUCK YOU!

[SyntherAugustus]

If you want it more serious change the look on that skull.

[Scuba Steve]

Best way to make it look more realistic, is to try and replicate real bones. They look like cartoon bones right now.

http://home.flash.net/~rosabas/Skull.jpg

http://www.jennerssa.hpg.ig.com.br/fotos/atlas/femur.JPG

Study those and then try redoing the skull and Femur (or Humorous.) I don't understand what the things are under the bones on the sides... ribs? Try to define them more so we can tell what they are.



I had to look up alot of images of Vertebrae to get it to look right (although, it still needs alot of improvement to look like REAL vertebrae).

[Infinite Ammunition]

The skull looks like something you'd see out of the Far Side

[DooMBoy]

The title of this thread needs improving

[Nmn]

Thx for the tips Scuba.
Case closed, I'm not gotta let this rot in hell because of some blatant spammage.