Hellbent Posted November 17, 2004 heh, the drawings are really good, but the story kinda fell apart for me... it was funny at first and I laughed out loud at the first page and the second page was pretty funny, too, but found it less and less funney with each page. But keep it up, the drawings were really good! Just work on the story part or how you call it. 0 Share this post Link to post