Check out my song

[Nick Perrin]

I made this song in a Mac program called garageband. I might put it into my mod-int-the-works as a theme song... who knows?

Check it out.
http://www.icompositions.com/auditorium/showphoto.php?photo=10781

It's inspired by the style of Frank Klepacki(Command & Conquer soundtrack writer).

Feedback(heh heh) appreciated.

[AndrewB]

Lacks melody, harmony, and suffers repetitiveness, but otherwise is okay.

(I only listened to the first minute and a half.)

[Green Gates]

Nick Perrin said:

I made this song in a Mac program called garageband. I might put it into my mod-int-the-works as a theme song... who knows?

Check it out.
http://www.icompositions.com/auditorium/showphoto.php?photo=10781

It's inspired by the style of Frank Klepacki(Command & Conquer soundtrack writer).

Feedback(heh heh) appreciated.

Excellent. Somewhat of a powerful industrial sort of song. Slightly repetitive, but great.

[destx]

Boring.

[Janderson]

AndrewB said:

Lacks melody, harmony, and suffers repetitiveness, but otherwise is okay.

(I only listened to the first minute and a half.)

Simon? Is that you?

Hmmmmm, after listening to it it's quite good, you should donate it to a mod, you'know? Like the music that plays over the title screen in Doom3, I think that would be really effective.

A little repetetive sure but the overall sound is pretty sweeeeet!

[Green Gates]

Janderson said:

Simon? Is that you?

Simon Cowell, eh? Hail and bow deep down to his famous and eloquent words: "You are possibly the worst singer I have ever heard!"

[AndrewB]

Janderson said:

A little repetetive sure but the overall sound is pretty sweeeeet!

I wouldn't call it sweet. It's textured and bland, like a tortilla chip.

[Nick Perrin]

AndrewB said:

(I only listened to the first minute and a half.)

There's the problem right there!! The best is yet to come.

Anyway, thanks for the comments, keep on commenting if you haven't already!

I'm making music for either my own little CD or soundtrack to a mod, so the more I can improve the better!

I plan to make my next song more musical, if you've ever heard Frank Klepacki(which the style of feedback is based off) then you'll see that its more video-game music than good music. Of course like I said for my next song I plan to do a different, better style(more melodious and musical.

Still no vocals though. You don't want to hear me singing(but at least I can sing in tune!).

Edit: DestX, can you be more specific/explain what makes it boring?

[NiGHTMARE]

You're saying Frank Klepacki's music isn't good? Blasphemer! :P

Incidentally I'm eagerly awaiting the completion of his current project, the soundtrack for a Starwars RTS. I'm expecting Frank's take on John William's classic themes to be nothing short of amazing.

[Nick Perrin]

NiGHTMARE said:

You're saying Frank Klepacki's music isn't good? Blasphemer! :P

The C&C music i mean. And I only mean on a musical level, they're still great songs to listen to, i have both his solo CDs.(check out samples of them on his site).
He's done some great symphonic pieces.