I've made some Box Cover art for a fake videogame.

[JacKThERiPPeR]

http://img173.imageshack.us/img173/3666/unfinished7ri.png

Check it.

[Amaster]

It's almost as if you went out of your way to make the text unreadable :P Ditch the outer glows.

[MmM]

I very much like the rendered artwork, but I think the overall presentation falls short. I would recommend moving the woman to the center of the image (or, alternatively, adding another figure next to her in place of the big red box with text) and the majority of the text to the top and bottom. If you look at game packages in the store, that's generally how they're arranged. Your image, in its current form, strikes me more as a magazine advertisement than box art.