bejiitas_wrath Posted June 13, 2006 http://www.geocities.com/hungry_mancubus/doom3.jpeg I hope you like this one. I wanted something simpler than those HR ones I made before. I am accepting suggestions on how to improve this as I can fix this up and make it better according to suggestions. I kept the *.xcf file this time and I can change it whenever I want. 68KB Download Jpeg, but I can supply any format. Im taking a sh*t you fscking Gimp! 0 Share this post Link to post
Bank Posted June 13, 2006 The demon in the center is a bit more blurry in a bad photograph sense, not as in a motion blur sense. Other than that, it's quite good. 0 Share this post Link to post
EarthQuake Posted June 13, 2006 Three things, I would point out: the demon is a bit blurry, and you should show more of the level around it blending it into the background, or try and remove all of it. Also, the text should probably read "you're already" as opposed to "you are already" because it's a bit more fluent. Try reading it aloud to see what I mean. 0 Share this post Link to post
Coopersville Posted June 13, 2006 What he said-- It'd be better if the demon blended more into the backgroud, or just didn't appear at all. 0 Share this post Link to post
Ebon Posted June 14, 2006 The demon's eatin' my head :p Otherwise, the background looks like a cute roguelike game ;--) 0 Share this post Link to post
Pete The Padre Posted June 16, 2006 You ARE already dead, kinda bugged me too 0 Share this post Link to post
