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KingKill33

I've got a very long Doom Fan Fiction if anyone cares.

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I've written a very long Doom story, it isn't finished yet but it seems good enough to made into a Doom game. Okay, the name of the story is Doom: All Out War!!! so enjoy! Mars, the UAC has been testing its new time portal. The machine can bring things into our dimension from other times. Then, something went wrong, all contact to Mars was lost. A team was sent in to inspect what happened, they never came back, with the exception of Major Grandem Seeps. He was found crawling from the base into the platonium mines. He was suffering from a total mental breakdown. His only words were, "Demons...wiped out entire squad...Mother demon was leading the way..." With one last gasp of air, the soldier died...our story begins...


A young space marine, Davis Polinski, just signed up for the marines, hoping to see the cosmos. He sat in the rec-room watching space wars between fighting collonies. "What have I gotten myself into?" He asked as he turned off the television. A rumble shook the ground as platonium diggers harvested the precious material. "Private Polinski, we have orders to go to Phobos and protect a shipment of platonium until dawn. You are needed on the team. Do you accept?" "Yes sir!" "Carry out." Davis grabbed his handgun and armor. He climbed abord the ship holding three other marines, Major Chad Seigar, Colonal Jeffery Stevens and a grunt, Eric Valecs. Soon the ship lifted off to its destination; Phobos.
The platonium cargo hovered and landed in front of the marines ship, but it strangely didn't look human. The major opened the latch on the back of the ship, letting a sea of death pour out. Ungodly beasts attacked the marines. Most had pinkish skin and looked like shaved gorillas with bulls horns and lots of teeth. Another type was brown and had spikes on its shoulders and arms, they also had the ability to throw fireballs. Davis grabbed his pulse rifle and ducked behind a building. Eric followed, he shot one of the demons in the head killig it. "Aim for the head!" He yelled as marines aimed and fired at the beasts. Several more marines got butchered by the monsters. Soon no more marines stood or breathed, except Davis and Eric who took out some of the demons. "We've gotta get out of here!" "How? The ships gone." "You're right, we've got to find another way off this death-trap."
Another gorilla demon attacked the pair, Eric was the one to put a shell in its skull. Davis and Eric entered the base, a long narrow coridor lay ahead. They crept through the hall, noticing low growls growing closer in the grasping darkness. Davis opened a door, allowing him access to some lighting, and another fire blasting demon. Eric plopped down into a chair and began turning on the lights in the complex. "What's this?" He coughed as he openned a file named 'journal entries'. 'Day one, we began research on the portals as usual, but today it started to act like a whol new type of device, somewhat evil. The portal has been acting really weird lately, spiting out devilish devices that seem to be coming from Hell. We've collected pieces to a machine the demons may be using as a weapon. Demon classification. demon: big, looks like a shaved gorilla with horns and alot of teeth. imp: smaller in size, brown, spikes cover parts of body, shoots fireballs.'
'Cacodemon: floats, redish skin, one eye and a big mouth, has horns and spits fireballs. Baron of Hell: large, looks like a minotaur, throws green fireballs. Hell Knight: same as Baron except skin is brown instead of red. Lost Soul: floating demon skull that's on fire. Pain Elemental: looks like cacodemon except it spits out Lost Souls and is brown. Arachnotron (or spiderdemon): head brain and arms hooked up to mechanical legs, shoots plasma rounds. zombies: our former buddies, now minions of Hell. Mancubus: fat demon, brown, cannons on arms shoot homing fireballs. Revenant: large skeleton demon, has heat-seeking missile launcher on back. Arch Vile: no information, only thing known is that it can bring fallen conrads back to life. Spider Master Mind: no information. cyberdemon: no information. Motherdemon: only thing known is that she cannot be destroyed by our weapons. Masterdemon: not sure if this one exists.' 'Day two, where the hell is everyone? There's no one around, and I can hear strange growls. Did they get killed by those undead bastards?'
"Come on Eric, we have to go." "Okay. I found a map to the complex." "Good, we'll need it." Then the words YOU ARE NOT GETTING OUT ALIVE appeared on the computer screen. "Huh? What's this?" Davis played with the mouse, "Turn it off." "We can't, it'll shut off the lights." "Damnit." The two exited to find zombies weilding tons of guns, "Humansss...must kill..." The monster shot at Davis injuring his arm. The second zombie fired, hitting the other one. "That hurrrrrrt...you diiiie..." "Hurry let's get out of here while they're blasting the shit out of each other!" The pair ran down the hall as the zombies killed themselves. Davis wrapped medical tape around his arm, soaking up the blood. "Where do we go to get to an extra ship?" "According to the map we have to go all the way through the platonium mines and through another complex." "That sounds like great fun." A demon lurked close by, sniffing out the marines, the beast started to hunt. Davis heard a low growl in the shadows and drew his handgun. A dark shape burst out, giving him a chance to open fire. "Die, die, DIE!!!"
Eric joined in, blasting the bejesus out of the grunting monster. They both stopped to welcome another demon, blowing its head off. They continued to the lab, looking for keys along the way. A door openned reveiling a hidden passage to the lab. "Eric, go to the lab and clear it out, I'll gather the three keys." "Right, just don't die on me." Davis went back to the control room for a key he saw a dead worker holding. Openning the door he gasped, an eight foot tall Revenant stood before him. "Puny human..." He unhulstered his pulse rifle and shot the beast, knocking it down. Davis grabbed the keycard and hurried out of the room. The injured Revenant quickly got up and was giving chase. Unloading more shells killed the massive wraith, letting him find Eric. "Eric! Where are you?" "Over here, I need help!" He yelled as he tried shuting a door. Davis grabbed a part of the door and started to help close it. A demon was trying to open the door from the other side.
Closing the door, Eric hit a switch, filling the other room with platonium radiation. The glowing crystals started to burn the demon, reducing to a pile of bones. "Yeah! We killed it!" Davis grabbed a keycard and openned a door with it. "A time portal? What's it doing here?" The giant machine suddenly buzzed to life, "Transporting object." With a bright flash of light, a Tyrannosaurus Rex appeared from the portal, roaring and grunting. Quickly, the lack of oxygen in Phobos' atmosphere soffocated the mammoth reptile. "Let's go back in time and warn the other marines about the demons!" "Are you sure we should fuck with time?" "Sure, it's for a good cause." Eric set the time for an hour before the troops began getting ready to inspect the base. "Let's go..." Davis sighed as they entered the machine.
Mars marine barracks, Davis and Eric suddenly appeared in the rec-room. "Polinski, Valecs! Why aren't you preparing for the Phobos mission?" "Listen, sir. We came from the future to warn you about the mission. The platonium cargo ship, it's not carrying platonium, it's carrying demons from Hell!!!" "Are you really from the future?" "Sir, I watched the smelly beasts rip you apart, I am from the future. If you don't prepare for the demons, Earth won't have a future." The Major talked into his head-phone, "Troups, there's a change in weapons, bring the biggest and most powerful guns. Bring others too, over and out... What're you guys waiting for? Help us!" "Sir yes sir." Eric and Davis went on to tell him about the monster types and their weakness'. "Sir, if the Mother demon comes pull back...She's too powerful for us." "Can't she re-spawn those bastards?" "Yes, but that's not the point. Until we find a nuke powerfull enough to kill her, we have no chance in Hell." "Guys, a strange craft is on its way, should we open fire on it?"
"Open fire at once! That's the demon's decoy cargo ship, destroy it now!" "I can't! the nukes aren't working on cammand!" Davis grabbed a BFG 9000 and ran to the landing ship. The hatch flew open, releasing the Hell spawns. "Everyone get down!" Davis shot a giant blue energy-ball into the crowd of growling demons. A horrific explosion rocked the planet, destroying the mob of monsters. "Pansy-ass butt munchers! Go back to Hell!" "Not so fast..." A scratchy demonic voice emerged. "I am an Arch Vile, redeemer of souls. Rissse minionssss!" Davis shot another blast, directly at the wraith, nailing it, but not killing it. "Eat this puny mortal," it groaned as it tossed a fireball barrage at him. Two connected, the other five hit the barracks. Davis let out another BFG nuke, killing the Arch Vile finally.
The mob of demons Arch Vile resurrected closed in. "Shoot the pink bastards!" Davis turned and pulled the lever on the gun. It gave a light squeek and exploded a massive fireball into the demons. Bodies littered the ground, Eric and Davis celebrated in the rec-room. "Hey, Eric get on the radio and call in the troops at the Deimos." "Right away!" He grabbed the radio and was almosted shocked to hear the sounds of pure mayhem. Guns firing, screams, primal roars, people shouting orders, several dying moans, then, silence. "Davis...we've got a problem..." "What?" "Deimos troops are dead." Davis shuddered and began to sweat a lot. "Eric get on the radio and check Phobos..." Checking it, he shook his head, meaning there was no sign of life.
"Okay everyone, be calm, we can't have any kind of worrying. We have to-" Davis' plea was cut short as a rumble shook the Mars base. Eric ran to the window and saw a horrible sight. Millions of them, millions upon millions of demonic beasts assembled an army. Several Cyber-demons lurched at the back of the massive group of monstrousities. Three rows of zombies led the way, next there were ten rows of imps, ten rows of demons, then seven rows of cacodemons, six rows of Barons and Knights (mixed together), a row of spiderdemons, a row of Pain Elementals, two rows of Revenants, one Spider Master Mind, one Arch Vile, a row of Mancubus', seven cyberdemons, and the bringer of this carnage, the Motherdemon.
"Everyone get a BFG and start firing at them!" Eric, come with me!" Eric and Davis hurried to the weapon-bay and grabbed some backup weapons, a couple of pulse rifles, some grenade launchers, a laser blaster and some mines. They had to fight their way back, killing imps and demons mostly. On the surface, most of the monsters had been wiped out, namely the demons, zombies, imps, and cacodemons. Eric grabbed the laser blaster and pulled the trigger, seven laserbeams shot out, ripping the army apart. The remaining monsters ended up shooting each other, fighting to the death. "NO!!! DO NOT FIGHT MINIONS! OUR MOTHERDEMON IS GROWING ANGRY!" The Spider Master Mind spoke telepathicly, the monsters didn't even listen to the brain. The spider-beast opened fire on its own fighters, its Vulcann Cannon barrels spitting out massive death. A battle field of dead bodies and chaos sit in the distance.
The Arch Vile resurrected the monsters. "STUPID PEON!!! YOU SHALL DIE FOR THIS INSULINCE!" The mind projected as it blasted the monster into oblivion. The Motherdemon raised one of it's four arms and shot a flaming ball into the crowd, destroying them all, leaving no trace of an army. The cyberdemons advanced forth, the spidermind and Motherdemon following behind. "ALL SEVEN OF YOU CYBERDEMONS ATTACK THE HUMAN BASE AND LEAVE NO SURVIVERS!!!" The seven cyberdemons quickly advanced forth, firing rockets at the base."Everyone into the basement! They won't be able to shoot us down there!" A cyberdemon noticed the last space marine heading into the basement and roared in frustration. "THE HUMAN SCUM IS ESCAPING! ONE OF YOU GET IN THERE AND TEAR UP THE FLOOR! THEY ARE HIDING UNDER IT..." A cyberdemon did as it was told and shot rockets at the tiled floor.
Davis opened a door leading to the base on the other side of Mars. "They're trying to get in! Follow me!" The crowd emptied into the coridor. The cyberdemon finally got in, looked around, and screamed in rage. The Spider Master Mind scuttled into the basement, he could just fit in the hallway. He scampered down the halls and heard the group moving into another room. The Motherdemon roared in triumph as it hovered and flew towards the other base. The cyberdemons stood around and looked into space. Eric shot down the coridor, hitting the spidermind's fuel tank. Looking around, the monster screached and fell to the ground. Eric looked back and yelled, "Everyone get down! It's gonna blow!" The massive arachnid android exploded into a million small pieces. "Yeah! We killed the son of a bitch!" A grunt chanted. They continued down the hall to find the next room, a computor room, a yellow keycard sat on a desk with a revolver. Eric grabbed the gun and headed into the hallway. He ran down to a yellow edged door and inserted the card. The next base was open! The rest of the group followed, headed to the housing area, boarded up the door and went to sleep.
Eric and Davis woke up to find all the other soldiers massacred. Nothing moved. Eric noticed that the door had not been un-boarded. "Why are we the only survivers?" "I don't know. All I know is that I am really freaked out." Eric grabbed his revolver and loaded it. An imp dove through the window into the room. The brown demon got up and grinned with its massive mouth. The creature hockered into its hand, letting the snot catching fire quickly. "Eeeeat thissss!" The wraith moaned as it threw the fireball at the two. Eric dove out of the way, but Davis was hit in the ribs. Eric shot the imp in the back of the head, earning an instant kill. Davis tried but couldn't get up, "M-m-my ribs are b-b-broken." Eric knew where to find a great healing source, a megasphere! Eric ran into the medical supply room (after un-boarding the door). He grabbed a pair of massive forcepts and picked up the healing agent. Dropping it on Davis, the blue circle melted upon him, healing all sickness and damage.
"What was that?" "A megasphere." Davis got up and looked outside, "We need to split up to get out of here, but first the Motherdemon has to die." "I'll go to the garage and check for a ship, you try to kill that monster." "Okay." Davis unholstered his pulse rifle and walked into the hallway and was emidiatly attacked by a spectre, or an invisible demon. He shoved the guns barrel into the monsters mouth and pulled the trigger. Giving a piggish cry, the demon landed on the ground with a wet splat. Brains and blood covered the walls now, Davis ran into a small room. A trio of imps wandered around in the room, one attacked, but got several pulse shells to the head. The other imps got scared ant tried to run away, Davis shot a single shell through one imp and into the other. The leather-skinned demons were hiding an energy-cell. Davis grabbed it and went back into the hall to find some more spectres.
Exterminating the invisible bastards, he opened a locker at the end of the hall, a dead body fell out, maggots squirmed in and out of the eye sockets. He turned around and headed back the other direction. A Mancubus waited in one room, the monster shot a pair of cannon balls at Davis. Dodging, he returned fire. The monster wouldn't die! Davis emptied the last shell of the pulse rifle into the monster, a small click told him that. The Mancubus laughed as it also noticed that. Davis loaded his grenade launcher, and fired several shots into the fat ass monster. The creatures arms melted from the torso and the head sunk into the ribs. A large mess covered the ground, as did at least seven thousand pulse shells. Davis grabbed a keycard that sat in the mouth of the beast, "That thing will eat anything!" Davis ran down the hall to a small chamber holding a couple of imps, one threw a snot-wad at him. It hit head on and knocked him back as he fired some shot-gun shells into ones forehead. The other imp leaped toward Davis, who was aiming in the imps direction.
Davis shot the gun into the monsters stomach, entrails sprayed in every direction, covering the walls and ceiling. Davis got to his feet and entered a door leading to the cafeteria. The tables were aranged into a pentagram-like shape, zombies stagared about blasting out the windows. He killed one zombie, alerting the other Hell-spawns. A zombie lifted itself into view, food and other things dropping from its clothes. An imp wandered from the kitchen, blasting away garbage cans, and any zombies in the way. Davis ducked behind a foodstand, finding a box of shells. The imp was ordering the zombies to do something, but Davis couldn't hear it. He aimed and a shot a shell at the imps head. The shell hit with such velocity that the imps head imploded. The group of zombies quickly turned on one another. Soon, corpses covered the floor, Davis found several ammo clips for his handgun. He ran out another door to find a cacodemon. The monster opened its maw and burped out a ball of lightning at him. The ball splattered against the wall, making the cacodemon stop to gather more energy. Davis blasted the fat red beast until it slammed into the ground. Blue stomach-acid leaked out causing the corpse to gather electrical energy and explode.
Another cacodemon floated into view, same battle tactics, dodge-fire, dodge-fire. The body exploded, this time while it was still floating in the air. Davis ran down the hall to run into a spiderdemon. The monster shot a round of plasma rounds at him, missing all the blasts and getting very pissed off. The demonic spider skittered across the floor towards Davis. An evil stench filled the air, it smelled like extremely rotten lemons, all coming from this huge monster. The beast opened fire again, hitting Davis in the stomach. "Son of a bitch!!!" He flew backwards into the wall. He fire a couple shot-gun blasts into the monsters brains, killing it instantly.
In the next room the imps and demons looked as if they were on PCP, wandering around in circles and attacking anything that moved, which ment each other. Davis loaded his shot-gun and fired at the closest target, an imp. The others didn't notice anything, if they did, they surely didn't give a shit. Several bodies hit the floor, mostly demons. The imps had the advantage because of their ability to blast those powerful snot-bombs. Another body fell, an imps, a demon had leaned over and bit it in half. What was left of the inside covered the floor. Davis made his way through the forest of bodies, shooting anything that got in his way. He found a box of shells and exited the building. A vast desert surrounded the building, several mountains, larger than the base, sat three yards away. "Perfect place for an ambush." Davis sighed as he cocked his shot-gun. Several demons came barreling around the corner, hunting for food. They sort of lost interest when their heads were blown off. Davis rounded the corner, a teleporter sat in front of him. He stepped in it and was instantly taken to a small room. Enemies were all around him, grunting, roaring, shrieking and belowing.
He unloaded a dozen shots into the mob of monsters before he could reach a switch in front of him. The floor started the move,and then, it dropped into a lava pit. Davis was still holding onto the switch. He pushed it up and another floor replaced the one that was smoldering below. This room could become a nice trap for the demonic beasts. A door opened, entering, Davis was welcomed by a pair of Lost Souls. He shot one skull, also hitting the other. The two monsters exploded into a few smoldering ashes. Davis found a room filled with toxic sludge, three demons, and an explosive oil drum. The pink monsters dashed forward, Davis shot one demon in the chest, making the others go into a feeding frenzy on its dying ass. Next he shot the barrel, the other two beasts were vaporized along with the smelly corpse on the ground.
Davis waded through the toxic sludge, the green slime ate through his double layered leather boots. He quickly leaped the rest of the way through slime and onto a small cat-walk. The small plank passage way hung above a pit of lava. Slowly but surely, the wooden plank began to give away. Davis ran to the end of the plank as the last board plummited into the fiery abyss. He turned and came face to ugly-ass face with an imp. "Mansssss....sssssslave...." The brown demon evily grinned as it tossed a burning snot-ball at Davis. Dodging, he pressed a button on the floor, dropping the wall behind the imp. A stampede of demons stomped and smashed it imp into the ground as they charged towards their releaser. Davis moved to the side, most of the demons slid into the lava pit, because they had no means of stopping themselves.
The remaining demons started to attack Davis, he shot his gun several times, two of the five demons fell and rolled into the pit. The other three were still attacking, biting and slashing at him. One demon knocked Davis down, hitting his gun out of his hand. The pink freak drooled inches from his face, "Eat this you pink faggot!" He screamed as he jammed his survival knife deep into the beasts gut. The last two demons grunted piggishly and charged. He ducked and rolled between them, grabbed his gun and blasted one away. The demon dropped to the ground and flailed for several seconds and then died. The other demon looked down at its fallen brotheren. The creature roared and began to devour the dead body. Davis didn't have many more shells, he'd have to kill the monster with his knife.
The monster screamed in agony as blood filled its mouth. The sharp blade of the knife was stuck in the throat of the demon. The beast fell to the floor, "Goddamnit, that thing was easy to kill. They are really gonna hafta' try harder to get me." Davis said pulling out his knife with several chunks of pink bleeding flesh. The door behind him opened, a zombie wearing combat-armor stumbled out of the passage towards Davis. "Follow masters orders, kill hu...man....." He took his knife to the zombie, letting it know who's boss. SCREEEEEEEAAAAAA!!! A hideous scream echoed through the Martian atmosphere, the Motherdemon was close to his location, he ran through the door. He ran down the steps and right into the Motherdemons nest. The wall behind him close off his escape route, the behemoth sit before him, hovering above the ground. This really sucked, not only was he not ready, but he had absolutely no good weapons, only a knife and handgun. "SO, YOU ARE THE ONE WHO DESTROYED MY BABIES, YOU WILL NOW FIGHT ME... THE RULES ARE VERY SIMPLE, SELECT A WEAPON, AND TRY TO SURVIVE. PREPARE FOR BATTLE PITILESS ONE..." A table appeared, holding tons of weapons that seemed to look good.
There were tons of handguns, two magnums, a shot-gun, two chainguns, a plasma rifle, grenades, napalm grenades, a BFG, three double barrel shot-guns, an uzi, four assault rifles and a weapon that seemed to be a laser. It had a pentagram on it, and was wrapped in human flesh. "I choose the giant laser thing." He grabbed it and pushed a small blinking button on the back, seven lasers shot into the ground. Smoke rose from the holes in the floor Davis just made. The Motherdemon screamed in triumph as it dashed towards Davis head-on. He moved out of the way and shot the beast in the back. Three of the seven beams had connected. The monster roared and shot four fire-bombs from its four arms. They were homing blasts!
Davis rolled under the bombs, letting them hit each other. He fired again, nailing the Motherdemon in the chest with six of the beams. The wraith slowed down. Davis shot again, this time getting the Motherdemons head to crack open. Blood splatered against the floor as several more lasers seared through the monsters soft flesh. "ENOUGH!!! I HAVE LOST TO YOU... I WILL RETURN YOU HOME TO EARTH..." The monster screeched, the walls vanished, and the two fighters were in a baron waste land. "Where are we, this isn't Earth!" "YES IT IS... WE GOT YOUR ATTENTION LONG ENOUGH TO INVADE EARTH AND DESTROY ALL THAT LIVED." Davis shot the Motherdemon one last time, killing it.
"Noooooooooooooo!!!" Davis' voice echoed around the wasteland of bodies. "Davis...it's Eric... found*...*in front*...*the complex...goning to try and destroy them*...*AAAAAHHHHHRRRGH!!!" "Eric! Come in! It's Davis" The radio went dead after the sounds of screaming and gun-fire died down. Davis ran to an abondoned neighborhood, gun-fire could be heard in the distance. A zombie wandered into the street, then a shell drilled through its skull. Its scalp now rested on its shoulder as it lay in a pool of its own blood on the ground. "Hold it right there! Who are you? Friend or foe?" "D-Davis Polinki. I'm friendly!!! Don't shoot!" "Why are you here?" "The Motherdemon teleported me here. Then I killed it." "I'm Flynn Taggart. I've been killing these damned sons of a bitch for six years. Seems the Motherdemon survived me blowing its ass up."
"So you're saying that the UAC is still working?" "Sure is... Some company named Core was funding it research on Mars, Phobos, Deimos, and one of Jupiters moons. They should have a weapon containment--" "I've gone there... The rest of the marines got all the powerful weapons. One by one, they all got torn apart by a cyberdemon. I killed the monster by shooting its rocket supply on its back." "Are you the only survivor?" "Yep. The demons pulled the continents together and left the ocean to fill up the space. Then the monsters just came right in, wave after hideous wave, until something called a Soul Harvester took the bodies and stole the souls." "What did this Soul Harvester look like?" "I don't know, it was too dark to actually see it. All I could see were the bodies the thing tossed aside, each one pale and writhing in pain."
"We've got to find any survivors on this Earth and find somewhere safe until we have a plan." "There are no survivors. That Soul Harvester killed all of them. It even killed some of the demons!" Davis loaded his gun and shot at a tin can lying on the ground. Flynn grabbed his arm, "Stop, I here something. Something big..." With that said, a cyberdemon burst out of the ground. The monster looked directly at the two and and roared as it reached inside if its rocket launcher. There was something or someone in it. A person roled out of the massive machine yelling, "Thanks for the rockets, fuck-head!" It was Eric, how he got on Earth is beyond me.
The cyberdemon tried to shoot at the three, click, click, click. Davis was the first to react, blasting the inside of the launcher as it clicked again. The sparks from the bullet created enough friction to ignite and blow up the launcher. Smoke arose from the stump at the end of the cyberdemons arm. The monster howled in anger and pressed a button on its wrist. The beast slowly teleported away just as Flynn was about to shoot it. "How in the hell did you get here?" "The cyberdemons on Mars were just sitting around, they didn't even notice me, well not until I opened fire. One cyberdemon after another was killed. One was just KO'ed so I climbed in its rocket launcher, took the rockets, then I fell asleep." Eric explained in a very tough way. An imp searching the area spied on them, "Masssster... humansssss... survive onslaught... what you want meeeeeee... do?" "DON'T MOVE, KEEP WATCHING THEM. FIND A WEAKNESS AND REPORT BACK TO ME..."
The imp watched with a sly evil grin. Eric got up and walked to a car, "Hey! I founds me a survivor!" He pulled the man out of the car and threw him to the ground. "Hey, what was that for?" "Who the hell are you?" "J-Jeff Garret... Phobos gate s-s-scientist." The man stuttered. "Explain to me how those monsters got to Phobos." "We were checking on the gates and heard a loud buzzing sound,then the machine said it was transporting an object. Three monsters appeared in gate, an imp, a demon, and a Baron of Hell. The imp grinned at me directly and pointed. 'Man slave' it growled. The demon snorted wildly as the imp drug a worker next to it. 'man slave... or food...' I watched in horror, as did the other six workers. 'You time up...' it mocked as it pushed my buddy towards the demon. The pink monster opened its mouth up to ten times its heads size, then got half of him in its mouth. The demon clamped its mouth shut, cutting him in half, we could hear him scream as it happened. Blood covered the floor, as did the rest of his body. The imp spit into it hand, the syliva caught fire, then the bastard threw it at us. Three workers were incinerated on cantact. The four of us ran into the hallway, I ducked into an office and locked the door. I wrote entries on the computor for two days, adding new monster types as the demons outside talked about them. Then I found a ship, flew it here, crashed and hid in the car."
"Did you see something called a Masterdemon?" "No. I only heard about it. The demons were talking about it. They said it wasn't anywhere close by their location. They said it was in Hell." "Who do you mean by they?" "Two Arachnotrons were talking telepathically, even though they were talking to one another I could still here them, and their thoughts." "What were those thoughts?" "Pure hatred for all mankind..." Jeff shuddered as he sat on the ground. The imp spying on them was looking at Jeff specifically, "Manssss........sssssslave from other place........!" "Yo, here somethin'?" "Yeah, why don'tcha check it out." Eric got up and redied his rocket launcher, "Here monster, monster, monster! Come to papa..." The imp ran and hid under a pile of metal and other debris "No demonic freaks here..." "Did ya' check in your ass?" "That's very funny... C'mon you dumb animal!" The imp slowly slid under the porch of a house.
Eric looked under the porch, "Gotcha'..." He put the rocket launcher away and got out his chaingun. He pulled the trigger... Instant raw hamburger... "Jeezus! Did you really have to do that?" "Yeah, got a problem with it?!" "No, warn us next time. You nearly filled Flynn with several new holes." Flynn crawled under the porch and drug out the dead body. It was completely torn to shreds, it wasn't even recognizable as a monsters body. Davis looked down the road, "Good freakin' Lord!!! A stampede!" A group of demon was heading their way, at least 30 of them. Davis redied his laser, as did Eric with his chaingun and Flynn with an assault rifle he found while Jeff was being interogated. Together they blasted at the stampeding demons. Several went down, at least 25 still charged towards the attacking trio. More bodies hit the concrete pavement. 17 to go, "Out of bullets! Gonna use my rocket launcher!"
He pulled lever on the launcher, a rocket spiraled out the end, knocking him back as it fired. The explosive canister landed in the group, particularily in the mouth of one of the demons. K-BOOM!!! The rest of the demons were mutilated as the rocket went off. ERRROUUUNG!!! A Hell Knight attacked as it roared in rage. Eric pulled the lever again, the rocket burst out of the end of the barrel, hitting the Knight that was several feet away. The explosion forced Eric backwards to the ground. The Hell Knight seemed to have not been affected by the blast. The monster closed in on Eric, then rose its hand in the air, signaling that it was ready to attack with its plasma. Davis shot the beasts arm with the laser, the weapon completely incinerated the monsters arm. Blood pumped out and on to the ground, where it then exploded into a cloud of green. Another shot was released on the Knight, this time nailing it in the head. The demons body fell to the ground, Eric got up and kicked the monster in the ribs. Go back to Hell, he thought as he kicked again.
"You three all know how to fight these things?" "Yeah... We had the find out the hard way, defending ourselves with weaker weapons." "These monsters have done this four other times." Jeff reached down and examined the green slime pouring out of the dead monsters body. "Plasma? This creature shouldn't have been alive. This much plasma would kill anything that touched it. This thing really is strong, stronger than anything from Earth." "It's a demon, it's from Hell. What did you expect to come out? Blood?" "No, this can't be real. Demons, plasma-blood, Hell. This is is just really fucked up." "It ain't a dream, bucko. This is reality. You should have seen Earth when those undead bastards took it over last time. We had to completely re build the Earth! It took those freaks only two minutes to take over Earth and us two years to clean up their shitty-ass mess!" "They have gotta be gotten rid of. Especially the Masterdemon, it seems to be the source of the demons planing."
"All three of you gotta protect me at all costs! I know where one of the time portals is. Head about seven miles that way, then you'll see the weapon storage facility. Down in the basement is a door that leads to the research lab. The 'gate' is down there." "Lets go." Eric confirmed as he and Davis covered Flynn and Jeff. "Another mile, only another mile!" Davis complained as he trudged through the sea of dead bodies in front of the facility. "A fence, damn it to Hell." Eric found the gate and tore off the lock. "You may now enter." Eric said in a funny way. More bodies were in the weapon storage room, the door leading to the portal electronically locked. "I'll open the door..." Eric aimed his rocket launcher at the door and was about to pull the lever whan the door slid open. "You should of remembered that I'm a UAC scientist, I have access to all military and research facilities, on Earth and in outer space." "I'm really begining to get annoyed by this."
The portal stood at least 50 feet of the ground, pentagrams and a really ugly monster face were etched into the sides of the portal. "The demons were here! Those aren't our designs, not even our religion!" "Of coarse they were here. They have gates, too. They could teleport in right now." The machine buzzed to life. "Transporting object." Three monsters appeared in the gate-way. They all looked like cacodemons, but they had arms and not as many horns. "Advanced cacodemons!!!" Davis alerted as he blasted on into oblivion. The next one hissed, as it upchucked a green lightning ball at him. It missed by inches. He returned fire just as the other cacodemon attacked. Flynn shot an entire assault rifle clip into the floating wraith. It exploded, harming the other one, cooking it with the bubbling fire that spewed out of its body.
"Okay, where do we wanna go in time?" "Since I was here I'll decide. Around 3:00 A.M., that's when they appeared in the sky." "Appeared?" "Yes, they had a space ship that landed. Then their seismic warper moved the land around." "Would you please repeat that last sentence?" "It moves any piece of land that is selected for it." "3:00 then, enter the portal." The four entered the portal. 'BBBBBZZZZZZZZZZAP!' Earth, edge of Baltimore. "Groovy. Let's do it again!" Jeff ran towards a military base that had a giant cannon mounted on top of it. "I'm gonna blast those bastards out of the sky!" "Wait!" "No use. He ain't gonna hear you. Just let him go, maybe it'll work." "Yeah, and the Browns are going to win the Super Bowl." Jeff climbed seven stories of stairs, and finally reached the cannon towers control room.
He looked through the sights on the scope of the cannon. "Bullseye." The demonic ship was seven kilometers in the air. Jeff pulled a lever on the wall, a giant laser shot out of the end of the cannon. Direct hit! The space craft swerved several times and crashed to the ground in a fiery explosion. Flynn Eric and Davis celebrated in the center of the street, like a bunch of morons. Then Davis and Eric suddenly disappeared, teleported would be more of a defenition of it. They reappeared in front of a giant head imbeded in a wall. "SO, YOU TWO THINK YOU'RE BIG AND BAD FOR DESTROYING MY DECOY? I'M THE MASTERDEMON, KING OF ALL THAT IS UNHOLY. PREPARE TO DIE...!" Davis unloaded all of his laser ammo into the monsters wiggling brains. The monster shot a blue fireball out of the massive hole in its forehead. The flaming burst of matter smashed against the wall, releasing several Barons of Hell, some new Pain Elementals, a new breed of Mancubus, an imp that got a hold of a berserker pack (fast acting steroids), and cyberdemon with a rocket launcher and plasma rifle. "Eric! Attack all the weak enemies! I'll get the mega cyberdemon!" "Okay!" Eric blasted all the enemies in front of him, all but mega imp survived. The rocket launcher was done, no more ammo. He pulled out a plasma rifle and blew away the brown bastard.
Then Eric attacked the 'new and improved' cyberdemon. Davis pulled out a hand grenade, pulled the pin, and threw it into the tangle of wires in the cyberdemons stomach. The top half of the monster blew up into tons of small flaming bits. Davis turned his head towards the Masterdemon, "You're next, you son of a bitch." Davis had one more grenade, he used it. "Eat this." The grenade landed in the open wound on the demons head. SPLAT! Monster soup. "Not so fast. The Masterdemon may be dead, but I the Gate-Keeper shall teleport you to plane far worse that Hell. N'Garai, the place of damned souls that no longer need a leader. You will go there for my entertainment!" The horrid voice boomed out of now where. Both men teleported to a dark area, the ground was cracked and brown, and the sky was red with dark clouds swirling about.
Davis looked around, nothing moved, Eric looked to the distance, "I see a temple, let's go." "I'll go first, we don't know what we're going to find." Davis cocked his plasma rifle (he found it lying on the ground). They ran towards the temple, and a loud, almost ear-splitting roar was echoing throughout the baron wasteland. The face of the Masterdemon was imbeded on the door, "They must have built the temple when he was boss." Another loud roar shook the ground, "What the hell is doing that?" Eric asked as the sound faded. "Whatever it is, it doesn't sound too friendly." Davis answered as he gripped his rifle tighter. Eric walked over to the door, a button was designed into the mouth of the face. Pushing it, Eric cocked his gun and aimed it at the door. The door slid to the side, and a hideous brown beast erupted from the passage. Two curved horns protruded from the beasts head, a ring hung from its nose, and it was holding a very bis hammer.
"It's a freakin' Minotaur, kill it!" Eric and Davis shot at the monster, tons of blood splashed from its body, covering the steps of the temple. The monster gripped the hammer and rose it into the air. With one mighty blow, the Minotaur smashed Eric into the ground, killing him. "You--you killed him! You're gonna die!!!" Davis picked up the plasma rifle Eric was holding. The hairy beast lifted up the hammer, bits of flesh dripped off, and parts of bone cracked as they hit the ground. Davis fired both weapons, directly at the demons head, until finally it fell to the ground with a thud. Another new creature came out of the temple, a mega imp with a cannon, wrist blade, and a infared seeing eye. The mech attacked, shooting a fireball out of its cannon. Davis dodged and fired his plasma rifles at the same time. All of the blasts hit except two, that flew into the temple and hit another imp mech.
The imp mech was dead, and the other was weakened by the damage it got when some of Davis' shots missed. "Die man slave, die like an animal!" The imps here could actually speak like a normal human, but that didn't matter, Davis blasted the demon into oblivion. He looked back, Erics corpse twitched a couple times and finally went limp. He entered the temple, demonic statues and symbols lined the walls, and another door was in front of him. He entered the door, a sea of green ooze covered the floor. Mist floated around all the statues and pillars in the room. Then, something cought Davis' eye, Eric was wading through the slime. "Eric?" "Davis, you're finally here." "How'd you survive being smashed in by that Minotaur?" "I didn't get smashed. The Gate-Keeper grabbed me and put a hologram in my spot." "I have your gun." "He took that, the bastard." "We've got to get out of here, maybe back to Earth."
Davis and Eric entered a small corridor, "It's too quiet, demons would be making a ton of noise by now." "Maybe it's a trap." Davis looked down the hall and saw a large symbol on the floor, surrounded by tourches. A giant skeleton was busy staring at the face on the floor. "LORD BAPHOMET, THREE HUMANS HAVE ENTERED N'GARAI, WE PRAISE YOU IN TELLING US WHO THEY ARE." "Look behind you stupid..." The massive skeleton turnt around and was greated with a few plasma rifle blasts. The wraith stumbled backwards and hit one of the torches, catching on fire. The monster flailed on the floor before it died. Eric pushed a large button on the wall, a ladder slid down from the rafters. They both climbed up and were surprised to see a giant pit, that had millions of demonic spectators. At the bottom was a row of cages built into the wall, and a throne at the top of the pit. The N'Garai Demonite sit upon his throne laughing at the tortured souls at the bottom of the pit.
Eric ran towards the ugly beast, but was stopped when a large fist impaled his chest. An Archon of Hell, the beast threw the body aside and focused on Davis. The demon threw a red plasma ball at Davis, almost putting a hole in his chest. Smoke rose from the kevlar armor as Davis blasted the Archons face into hamburger meat. "Die! Die you piece of shit die!" The beast lost balance and fell down the hole, and made a large red stain on the brick floor. "Very good human." The Demonite cackled as it knocked Davis into the large pit, the crowd of demons cheering him on. Davis hit the cold floor, hard. A loud 'crack' sounded when he did. Zombies were patrolling down here, several marine corpses littered the floor. Davis dashed at one of the zombies and took its weapon, a fifety millimeter tsunami, a tank stopper. He pointed it at a zombie and pulled the trigger. A large missile exploded out the end of the barrel of the gun, as well as some exhaust smoke. The missile hit the zombie and exploded, turning the zombie into spaghetti sauce, the lumpy kind. "Cool."
The rest of the zombies suffered the same fate. Gore covered the floor and walls. Davis ran up some spiraling stairs and into a small alcove. A dead body was hanging on the wall, it was Flynns. There was a door to his right, he entered it and was greeted by a imp mech. He blasted a hole the size of a basketball through its gut and ran through the doorway. Several lanterns were placed on the walls, this place was probably used often. A demon wandered into his path and got its own set of holes. "Why me?" "I'll tell you why, we chose you to fight me. Come on, I'll eviscerate you!" The Demonite threatened as it pounced. Davis blasted the monsters arm clear off. "Good shot!" The demon backhanded Davis into the wall. Davis shot the Demonite in the face, the creatures eyes were now hanging out of its face.
A floating skeleton torso and head arose from the Demonites corpse, the Soul Harvester... The monster growled and threw a fireball at Davis. The blue beam flew past him and hit the wall. Davis openned fire, blowing off the beasts arms, and then its face. The crowds of monsters outside surrounding the pit were growing angry, they sensed that their conrads were dead. Davis ran up some more stairs and into a arena. A cyberdemon stood at the other end of the arena, and it was already aiming at Davis! "Enemy being is invading Cyberdemons court! Destroy it!"

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Plenty of action in this one. It might be a little easier to read if you broke up those long paragraphs and put some white space between them. Other than that, nice job.

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I'll read it tomorrow, too tired right now.
(Just so you know that I'm interested in reading your story)

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Hmmm, you have an ok imagination.

I DO, however, dislike the element with talking demons (but that's just me).

It makes the demons seem too much like some sort of "comic-aliens", rather than demons from hell IMHO. I prefer to see Demons as rather mindless creatures, with only one thing in mind: To kill and torture. It usually feels more "authentic" when the creatures are described as mindless killer-"animals".

just an opinion.

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Dear God, that was a long story....took me 40 minutes to read it!
You should have of broken it up into chapters really, but other than that, a nice job. Keep it up. :)

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It might be a little easier to read if you broke up those long paragraphs and put some white space between them. Other than that, nice job.

I think he tried to, but when he copied and pasted, the indents didn't show up.

Anyway, very nice story. Long, but very good.

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