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The Hell Connection - Chapter 2

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If you havent read chapter one, go and read it.

The Hell Connection

Chapter Two

"I'm Commander Davis, Have a seat."

He has a cold, icy stare that reminds you of a ice storm. His frail hands open the breifcase, and he removes a thick file. Opening it, he reads intently, a low growling coming ocasionally from his mouth...

"Well, by the look of it, you're a hero. But not to me. Scum like you are the reason why good warriors like me are demoted to lowly desk jobs. Heros, my ass! If things were my way, rebels like you would be out on your ass... but no! Right now, the whole world thinks you're a savoir...grrr!" His rant sprays you face.

Your mind flashes back again...before Phobos...before Mars...

Pearl Harbor...the Taj wars...you were ordered to fire on a village...from this very general....

"That's enough, Andrew..." a new voice commands...

The commander looks behind him, a man in brown military clothes and thick sunglasses is glaring at him.
Davis spins on his heel and storms down the hall.

"Sorry about Andrew, he can be a handfull. I'm General Thomas."

General Thomas! The same General Thomas who led the attack on the Taj's fortress and killed her himself! no...what is a true hero like himself doing here!

"Have a beer, wont't you?" He holds a 6-pack of some beer labeled "Molson Export". He opens it and poors it into a glass for you.

"What day is it?" you ask. the beer burning you sore mouth.

"November 23, 2023. You've been asleep for nearly 3 months now."

"Where am I?"

"Dolares Vetren's Hospital, North Carolina."

"What of the...the.."

"The monsters? At exactly 9:08 pm MST, they all droped dead. That was the same time you killed IT..." He pours himself a beer.

"You see...they took over the whole world from two entry points. One was in Washington, at the arena where you entered 'Hell'. The other was in The Vatican, where you came through from...the other world"

Finaly some answers...woah...your head is spinning...the beer must have been drugged...damnit!


--end of chapter two--

tell me what you think...




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"November 23, 2023.


Ehh mate, I don't think we'll have advanced space stations on Mars (OR its two moons for that matter), plasma energy weapons or even 'space marines' in about 21 years from now.

True, technlogy advances really fast, but I still think it's a bit fantastical to believe that we'll get these things within the next 20 years.

Other than that - Good story, you're doing fine so far.

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Ehh mate, I don't think we'll have advanced space stations on Mars (OR its two moons for that matter), plasma energy weapons or even 'space marines' in about 21 from now.

True, technlogy advances really fast, but I still think it's a bit fantastical to believe that we'll get these things within the next 20 years.

Other than that - Good story, you're doing fine so far.


ok, i'll change the date

"Nov. 28, 2223

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