New map by me if interested.

[xxbio Warfare11]

here is pics :
http://s1057.photobucket.com/albums/t383/Doomguy115/MAP02/?action=view¤t=Screenshot_Doom_20120818_220636.png



and map: http://www.mediafire.com/?mlf1xo2j0j6bofb


if you choose to download, I would love some feedback. Good or bad.

[Acid]

Is it bad that I couldn't exit this map? Also, there was no way to grab the red key without jumping. For future purpose, it would be better to note that jumping is required. Now that that's out of the way:

The texturing is much better than your previous map, though it still essentially lacks detail. I'm not expecting a masterpiece, but try playing around with computers or screens in the wall or a few pillars here and there. Also, watch your texture alignment. For example, the red door was cutoff on the bottom. You can fix this by highlighting a texture in Doombuilder's visual mode and using the arrow keys.

Using a map cheat, I see that you left an unused yellow keycard and candle outside the map boundaries. I think it's better if you clean your map a bit first. All in all, it's a good attempt, but I'd recommend looking at other wads for inspiration or technique.

[xxbio Warfare11]

Thankyou for that detailed feed back and im verry happy that youve been patient with me and my maps . Also I am sorry that i did not mention you need to enable jump cheat and crouch, I intended to do that. But anyways How come you couldnt exit? And i left that stuff outside the map cause i didnt know how to delete it..Wich i know is something i should know by now. Im mainly glad to hear that ive improoved even just a little.

[xxbio Warfare11]

I will also keep the pillar thing in mind. Im trying to add detail. But your right i just need insparation. I was playing cc4 and deus vualt2 and i think i may add some stuff i saw such as windows and being able too see the inside of tech walls.

[Acid]

After entering the room with the SSG and demons, the door on the opposite side wouldn't work. I'd open the door, and nothing I did would let me advance the map.