First Speedmap ( 30 minutes )

[CosmicXIII]

Hey Doomworld,

I just finished a so called speedmap.
30 minutes in Doombuilder.

Map20

http://www.mediafire.com/download/rvp7t7zccnhapsc/Ebene1.wad

[Stupid Bunny]

There's not much to say about this one. I guess my biggest complaint is that it's got an extremely linear structure: clear small room, open door, repeat. All the rooms are a bit too small and very flat. The pain elemental wasn't very effective and I was able to easily kill it through the door without taking any damage.

[scifista42]

Well, the map suffered from being too simple in structure, short, trivial, with no purposeful height variation etc. The first encounter was good as a starter, but then the map failed to continue well. Lost soul challenge was inefficient. The rest of the fights dragged (=were unnecessarily too long), the only one well-used enemy was the revenant. Archvile could have been easily skipped. Okay for a speedmap, but as you're a beginner, better take your time to practice seriously.

EDIT: Also, the map crashes Zandronum because "linedefs 146 and 147 are missing a front sidedef".

[CosmicXIII]

Thanks guys !

Scifista42 dont ever lose your objectivity!

You really help newbies to get a feeling for it.

cheers