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DooMBoy

Inferno

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Trudging through the depths of Hell itself, fighting off demons, and hoping that you won't come face to face with Satan himself.
You've been trapped in this Netherworld for the past three days, and nothing but torment and misery has come of it. The absolutely terrible stench of rotting flesh, blood and guts no longer bothers you. The cries of the damned in the background, trying to destroy you from the inside out, they still haunt you.
You keep hearing them whisper, and taunt you. But there's nothing you can do about it. You must keep on going through this wasteland, praying to heaven you don't die. Would Heaven accept your soul after its body had been through Hell, anyway? You wonder about that.
You check yourself and find you've been daydreaming again. The voices are still there, just as disturbing as ever, you think you're probably on the verge of a nervous breakdown. The attacks of the demons are getting more frequent, as you near the end of your journey. As you walk along slowly, painfully, thinking these things, you are accosted by a host of demons. You've still got your shotgun and chaingun, and firing like a madman, you manage to kill them all, but not before a Demon rips your leg with his teeth. You scream in pain and blast the creature again, right in the face. It falls back with a throttled-sounding choke and thumps on the ground. Ground, in Hell? Not really. It looks a lot like intestines and other internal organs meshed together. It also smells like it. In the distance you see impossibly twisted and turned mountains raising out of the pits of Hellfire. The sky is a deep, bloody red. The wind here blows strong and hard, and there are lakes of blood everywhere. And everywhere you look, signs that the demons have stolen UAC's technology-skylights where there should be no skylights, concrete floor and walls.
Now you've stumbled upon what appears to be a fortress. The outside of the fortress is built of human flesh and bloody muscle, and the walls of the fortress appear to be crying blood. The main door to the fortress is heavy wooden door with a strange lion face carved into it.
You approach the door and it opens without a sound. Outside the wind picks up, its air scorching you. You are only too happy to step inside within from the Inferno without.
Just inside, it appears that this is apparently a place of for the bodies of people who've entered Hell and have no need for their bodies. Everywhere you look-corpses everywhere. The ceiling above looks to be made out of blood, yet it doesn't drip.
The damned souls whisper in your ears, "See us-see us-the demons-they killed us again-see....". The whispering fades into nothingness, and you are appalled by the grotesque imagery on the walls: upside down crosses made of skin and bone, carvings of demonic faces, and a giant pentagram right in the center of the room. You listen carefully. You hear nothing. Silence.
You step into the pentagram. In front of you is a monstrosity of a demon, one you've never seen before. It looks a lot like the Baron of Hell, only it's entire mechanical from waist up, and it's even taller. You decide instantly to call it the King of Hell. The King, or whatever it is, looks down at you for a second. That's when you notice-its eyes are electronic. You hear the whirring and buzzing as they analyze you. Its claws are razor-sharp, or sharper, and the demon twists them around with a mechanical humming. That's when you realize that this is a special breed of demon: biomechanical. You wonder for a moment if it has blood running through its veins, and that's as far you get.
The creature lashes out with one of its claws, the claws extending, grabbing you, and slamming you into the marble wall behind you.
The other claw extends a few feet, and the demon looks at you and utters a mind-blowing bellow from the depths of frame. You manage to get a hold of your chaingun and fire at the creature's head. It roars and releases its grasp upon you. You fall to the ground, dazed. You pull your shotgun, and take turns firing either gun at the monstrosity. The thing doesn't have a chance to fight back. Finally, a well-aimed blast from your shotgun completely takes its head off. The biomechanical body falls forward with a thud. You wipe the bloody sweat from your eyes, and are about to step forward, when a teleporter appears suddenly in front of you. You know that this could either take you home, or deeper into Hell. Whatever. You don't a choice. Besides, the thought of Home takes control of your numbed brain, and you decide that whatever's on the other side of this portal can't be that bad. Without a second thought you step into the portal, and vanish in a haze of green light....

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Maybe i've missed something/am a retard, but just which creature is this biomechanical demon supposed to be? It certainly doesn't sound like a Cyberdemon at any rate...

Otherwise, you're doing well in capturing the torture and anguish that goes along with the word 'Hell'. With some extra paragraphing, and a bit more attention to grammar (sorry dude, i'm trying to be constructive :)), you'll be onto a winner.

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That biomechanical demon is a new one which I made up. :)
Thanks for your input.

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DooMBoy, you should apologize for being creative and making something up, you shouldn't do that :P. Just kidding. I feel that fan-fics for Doom should make as much shit up as they want. Oh? The Doomguy has a flamethrower, neato! ^_^

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