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BlackFish

The Great War Intro

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The year is 2003.
The once known king named Bush is dead. All do to a destructive power of god. No, not jesus. Not the jewish god. Maximus, or we shall say.
Three gods, Maximus, Xenith, and Plutonia, have created the univererse, followed by making galaxies above it. All three were different when it came to which species. Xenith was human. The human was a white fleshed organism that varies in height, hair, teeth, and other aspectations. She made her planet called Earth. There, she produced her offspring. Maximus was a Ku, or shadowhuman. These greenblooded organisms were almost the same aspects as humans. The difference were the looks and attitude. Most wanted peace, others wanted war. Plutonia made mettalic organisms with no blood. They looked like Ku's but then they evovled to grey colored organisms called Plutonians, or Plutonia's offspring. Oh, Maximus owned Mars and Plutonia owned mercury.
Back to 2003.
Maximus's offspring have become overruled by hate and anger of the humans. A very few were peaceful. The humans lacked technology. The Ku's had high technology which looked like minority report style building and shit.
King Malza, of the Ku's, has now recieved notice that Maximus is out there, and willing to help destroy the tropical planet we call Earth. Will this happen? Only a 13 year old will be able to do this, but he does not know about what is going to happen. In fact, the humans only know that Earth is the only living planet, since Mars has been cloaked from Earth's radars.

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It is president Bush. The Jews worship the same God as us. Jesus is not a God. Don't jump from subject to subject "Oh, Maximus owned Mars and Plutonia owned mercury.
Back to 2003." that isn't good. Earth is hardly tropical. Planets are not alive. "Only a 13 year old will be able to do this, but he does not know about what is going to happen. In fact, the humans only know that Earth is the only living planet, since Mars has been cloaked from Earth's radars." make him older, I'm not sure writing about a 13 year old blowing away Demons with a shotgun is something you should write about, trust me.

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yes, but the story goes on for 6 years, ending up in 2008!
by then, he'll be 19.
and besides, im that 13 year old. :)

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and the story is like strife, only the "order" are the ku's and the rebels are the ku rebels and humans. :)

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