Draconio Posted August 30, 2002 Torn and bloody, creeping slow What an awful way to go Demons stalk me through the night Hunger fiercer than my fright My broken armor, stained with red Reminds me that I'll soon be dead But look up there ahead of me What is that glow of blue I see? Sparkling is that crystal sphere That alleviates my fear A moaning soul, caged within No mercy given for its sin Grasp the sphere, hold it tight Feel its surge of life and might That rush of all my health returning Icy cold yet feels like burning I rush back into the fray With strength to live another day 0 Share this post Link to post
DaJuice Posted September 3, 2002 I don't usually like most poems, but this one is really good, and I'm not just saying that cuz it's about Doom. 0 Share this post Link to post
GS-1719 Posted September 3, 2002 I don't really like poems, especially rhyming ones, but that is some good work. 0 Share this post Link to post