I made my first level.

[AdirBlaz]

As mentioned, it's a first. It's not good, I'll say that much. If anything I'd say it's rather basic. It's tiny as well, but I put some effort into it.

 

Suggestions/criticisms/general advice with mapping will be appreciated.

 

It was made for Doom 2, Map01 (Tested on GZDoom and Zandronum)

https://www.dropbox.com/s/blhcq4s3vzczd60/AdirLevel.wad?dl=0

 

Screenshots:

Edited December 16, 2017 by AdirBlaz : Added more text. Updated level.

[Misty]

Maybe put two screenshots and mention ports which you used for testing? It will be more helpful. 

[Dexiaz]

 

This map is very very good for the first one.

 

Well, I'll advice few things:

1) Don't put a "stack" of bonuses. I mean, on UV I saw 4-pack of health bonuses and armor bonuses. That's too many. Just place an 1 thing instead of 4.

2) Chaingun secret is good, but you forgot to fix middle textures of secret door.

3) The room with blue key is too small. Possibly it needs to be bigger. But not really necessary.

 

My respect to you. My first map ever wasn't so cool as yours.

[AdirBlaz]

12 minutes ago, DeXiaZ said:

 

This map is very very good for the first one.

 

Well, I'll advice few things:

1) Don't put a "stack" of bonuses. I mean, on UV I saw 4-pack of health bonuses and armor bonuses. That's too many. Just place an 1 thing instead of 4.

2) Chaingun secret is good, but you forgot to fix middle textures of secret door.

3) The room with blue key is too small. Possibly it needs to be bigger. But not really necessary.

 

My respect to you. My first map ever wasn't so cool as yours.

I actually believe I've accidentally slapped difficulty exclusions on some of the items, to be honest. But yeah, advice taken.

EDIT: Consider advice from you and Haruko taken.

Edited December 16, 2017 by AdirBlaz : My english is good, I swear it is.

[SleepyVelvet]

fda: noisy_AdirLevel.zip (recorded in prboom-plus complevel 9)

 

Needs like 127 more archviles.  That's all the advice I can give you.

[AdirBlaz]

13 minutes ago, NoisyVelvet said:

fda: noisy_AdirLevel.zip (recorded in prboom-plus complevel 9)

 

Needs like 127 more archviles.  That's all the advice I can give you.

... You know what, I'm gonna see if I can fit that many archviles in a dupe of the wad and send it to you directly.

[PsychoGoatee]

Kudos on your first map release! Always a good thing.

[mgr_inz_rafal]

Good entry-level for some bigger wad :)

 

 

[AdirBlaz]