arvidinator Posted February 24, 2018 Hey guys! I'm new here, and I just wanted to stop by to drop a comic that I recently finished. I plan to do more of these if they're well recieved. Many thanks for any form of feedback! I'll provide you with more content soon, I promise. BUH-BYE! 29 Share this post Link to post
bonnie Posted February 24, 2018 mean feedback: kinda went all over the place a little too long, some of the panels were pointless despite being too long, it was still far too short to warrant having the "the end" part the doomguy dialogue was cringy didn't capitalize on the handful pun good feedback: art is good the setup was pretty good but the execution of the actual punchline was not i like how they're casually mean good yes make more but keep them simpler and work on the punchlines a little this could probably work as one of them online comic site thingies yes 1 Share this post Link to post
arvidinator Posted February 24, 2018 Thanks for your feedback! I'll take it into consideration when making the next one. Also, the whole Doomguy dialogue thing wasn't in the original script. I added it as a reference to the incredibly cheesy original DOOM comic, but that still dosen't invalidate your criticism. I'll make sure to make more (and better) comics in the future. 1 Share this post Link to post
arvidinator Posted February 24, 2018 Oh, and just as a side-note, the "THE END" part was simply because I had nothing else to put on that page. I thought it'd be a bit funny, but whatever. 1 Share this post Link to post
KVELLER Posted February 24, 2018 (edited) I liked it a lot! I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work. Btw, these kind of things should probably be posted on the Creative Works section. 1 Share this post Link to post
Pegleg Posted February 25, 2018 I liked it. I liked the two cacodemons--they had a kind of we're just two guys at the office quality to them. I liked the "You go man!" motivation to his friend. I particularly liked how he went from positive and eager to unhappy and distraught. Having his eye brim with tears while being covered by the blood of his friend was a nice touch. 2 Share this post Link to post
arvidinator Posted February 25, 2018 1 hour ago, KVELLER said: I liked it a lot! I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work. Btw, these kind of things should probably be posted on the Creative Works section. Welp, I didn't even know there was a Creative Works section. Thanks for that, I should probably move this post over there. 0 Share this post Link to post
wheresthebeef Posted February 25, 2018 I liked it; kinda reminded me of the old Planet of the Imps comic! 1 Share this post Link to post
seed Posted February 27, 2018 (edited) I initially ignored this honestly, but now that I've read everything I actually enjoyed it. And the ending, ow, the feels... 2 Share this post Link to post
arvidinator Posted February 27, 2018 2 hours ago, Agent6 said: I initially ignored this honestly, but now that I've read everything I actually enjoyed it. And the ending, ow, the feels... Thanks for checking it out! 0 Share this post Link to post