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  1. I made a revison of that sonnet I did earlier. Need some comments.

    When I first saw you with your lustrous eyes
    The world had seemed to collapse before me
    I almost felt like I might just die
    Before my soul can tell you to believe

    That you transcend the beauty of all angels
    The eyes of mine do not hallucinate
    I feel as if I were in a tangle
    My heart, it beats, awaiting for a fate

    For my emotions sink in deepest love
    To your visage, and you astral figure
    None other, that I will ever dream of
    That I will remember forever more

    I wish you can live for eternity
    Cause my love for you is infinity

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