SyntherAugustus

I have to do a sonnet draft due tommorow and I came up with this. I was wondering what you guys thought of it.

When I first saw you with your shining eyes,
The world had seemed to collapsed before me.
From which the the heavens, where the angels glide,
You are the most beautiful I have seen.

You surpass the beauty of all angels.
I cannot lie, I've seen all the others.
If maybe, the heavens can let me tell,
that is, your wings are glowing with feathers.

I see you now, my heart in deepest love,
with your face, and your terrific figure.


None other that I will ever dream of,
Will keep a stay in my heart forever.

I wish you could live for eternity.
As so should I, love is infinity.