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Shadow Dweller
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i have come to the conclusion that i shall post here parts of the story, seeking advice (all you writers out there may be able to offer some opinions). Note: i am trying to keep it clean as far as language goes. any opinion that can help me will be appreciated. there may typos as i wrote most of this at night.
now before i start and possibly make my self look like a babbling fool
would you like to read it from the beginning so you can get the idea of what is going on yourself or do you want me to cut to the chase and tell you what the point of it?
i do not know what will come of this, but we shall soon find out...- Show previous comments 7 more
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then how about i submit the prologue? where most of the background information comes from.
I thought it was funny only when I imagined Anthony Hopkins' voice on the Entity thingy.
heh that would be funny had i intended this to be a comedy.
against my will, i'll sumbit the prologue; long, boring, and really long. but you'll get the idea and i won't be delivering quite so many "huh?"'s per second. at least let me get home, first and i'll replace chapter six with prologue and go in order from there. -
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