mo' murder (my 3rd map) (finished)

hi,
please let me know if you have any ideas or improvements, and if you find any bugs. thanks! :)

build time +25 hours
editor used doom builder 2
no difficulty settings
tested with prboom+ / zdoom / (g)zdoom

http://www90.zippyshare.com/v/x2P0bekV/file.html

edit: new link

screenshots:

finished! your feedback is warmly welcomed! :)

missing textures fixed. :)

That looks pretty hellish. 9/10, Nice map, you will learn to make better maps some day. but we can all wait, I look forward to your 4th map!

Looks ok, maybe change the gstone2 textures with a marble1 texture in the second shot, it could look better

I'll add this to my upcoming playtesting stream on Sunday. Hope it has a better end part than your last map!