Dr. Bogs Binny Posted September 14, 2014 This is a part of a BIG fan art I'm working on, and I need feedback on this current W.I.P of the Spider Demon/ Mastermind. And I am well aware of the lack of the mechanical half, that will be for later. http://i.imgur.com/QzP3i9F.png Thanks for your time. 0 Share this post Link to post
Gez Posted September 14, 2014 The concavity of the face is a bit surprising. 0 Share this post Link to post
Coopersville Posted September 14, 2014 Seems alright so far. I can see it coming to together once shading is applied, and maybe even darkening up the lines, depending on the style you're going for. The eyes seem a little off, like it looks surprised, probably because it currently appears that it's looking down, but its eyelids are still wide open. Could probably look more mean. Perhaps lower the brow to give it more of a grimacing gaze. 0 Share this post Link to post
Jaxxoon R Posted September 16, 2014 I could easily imagine this being in Rayman Legends. Finished up, of course. 0 Share this post Link to post
Waffenak Posted September 19, 2014 Looking fine, strenghten wrinkle and muscle lines to make them slightly more visible 0 Share this post Link to post
RUSH Posted September 20, 2014 Nice so far. I like how you incorporated the orange "cat eyes" from the Mastermind model: http://dash.ponychan.net/chan/files/src/138711874103.jpg 0 Share this post Link to post
Jaxxoon R Posted September 21, 2014 Is this still being worked on? This is like his only post in the entire forums so far, man. 0 Share this post Link to post